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Guest chapter 1 . 6/7 This is such an awesome au and so well written! |
OrangeSunset1701 chapter 1 . 5/18 This was so incredible to read! This was the Big Brother Roy fic I didn't know I needed. Roy's relationship with the boys was very well done. I enjoyed reading it immensely and will definitely come back to read it multiple times. It makes me wonder, what exactly would change in the rest of the canon. Would Al ever be a sacrifice since he never performed human transmission? I imagine Ed and Al would react slightly differently whenever Roy's life was in danger, such as when Lust nearly kills him or when he was forced through his portal. Anyway, thank you very much for this story! |
The Dark One Rising chapter 1 . 11/19/2019 Now this was an interesting plot. Despite keeping close to canon, there were also some very blatant differences. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2018 Pweesh continue writing |
LucidKren chapter 1 . 2/8/2018 This was a delight to read. I love the brothers bond that grew between the characters. I have always loved parental!Roy and this definitely satisfied. (Also, I am really happy Al was spared from the armor suit). Fantastic AU! |
kylC chapter 1 . 9/29/2017 urghh that last line made me cry damn it. |
YAJJ chapter 1 . 4/2/2017 MY HEART IS SO WARM |
L. Parker chapter 1 . 3/1/2017 Oh my god. Ohmygod, ohmygodohmygodohmygod! I know you said that there's no sequel but can you please just do a little one shot blurb about people finding out? Or wacky traditions that they do on holidays when there all together? Or birthdays? I mean this is sooooooo good! But you don't have to do anything I'll just hope. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2016 wow the details in this are great, and the story olso! I really loved it, thanks |
Beloved Daughter chapter 1 . 8/25/2016 Fun antics. Loved the story. Thanks for writing and posting. |
Artdirector123 chapter 1 . 7/4/2016 This fanfic ius so cute! I loved how you portrayed roy, and the letters the boys sent to him broke my heart a little. I also really liked the scen with Maes looking over Roy's shoulder. That was awesome! This was so good, I kinda wish this story was canon! Anyways, wonderful job! |
Deadlycake chapter 1 . 5/20/2016 It started good, but it went down about half way through. |
LeChick chapter 1 . 4/14/2016 This is probably the best "what if they are related!" AUs I have ever come across... in any fandom. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2015 I love this! Thank you for writing it! |
flamestang chapter 1 . 4/10/2015 You make me wish that this is what happened. I've never seen a story with Roy actually being related to Ed and Al, but now I'm wishing that there are more of them. Very well-written and very interesting plot. I like what changes were made to make this happen and I love that Al didn't have to be put into the armor. :D |