Hmmm nice

Nooooo!

Ohhh he’s twisted up for a man so young

Good start

Love this switch up

Huh, I’m surprised I haven’t read this before... butbonus.

Sequel please?

In this story, Jasper was essentially himself yet he was more intelligent, a better problem solver, more controlled and compassionate than he was in S.M.'s Twilight! He'd suffered tremendous abuse yet he fought nd became a better person physically, emotionally and mentally! He really was so intelligent he was almost scary!

I loved your version of Bella! Jasper's love an compassion helped her grow and change back into her real self! It was amazing to read how she got better each day!

I don't care how gorgeous Carlisle is! What he and Edward did to Bella was horrific! Then, there was the family vote to have her have sex with Garrett to scratch an itch! Yuck! I really didn't like Carlisle or Edward in this story!

I loved Charlie! He really was an awesome Dad! I was o happy when he took Peter into his life and adopted him!

I loved Seth! I thought Jasper was a good friend to him and it was so good of him to play it forward when he started help Seth to gain more confidence in himself! Seth's actions and how he reacted to Jasper's fall and saved his life was incredible!

I'm glad he was able to help Alice and Garrett! I was very happy for Alice to get her self back and she could be who she really is d not live in fear of James!

I could go on for a long while about this story but I won't! I loved it and thank you for writing it!

This was good and it didn't have the break like the regular Twilight

This was a quick story but definitely an optimistic ending! I hope you made a sequel.

You should make a sequel.

interesting take on things :)

this was an intriguing story, I enjoyed the differences in the characterisations and their personalities, but also how you brought it back to something which worked out so well in the end!

I enjoyed your story. It was very different. Thanks for writing and sharing.

~Spudz

Good story