Love the story! Are you going to update again because I would like to read what happens next and till the finish of the story!

more like a mystery story to me

When ya coming back?! I'm left crying in the corner here!

Nice story so far, will you be finishing it, I'd like to know how it ends

First of... I'm so glad that Sunstreaker is finally healing! Slowly, maybe, but is healing. This was also another great chapter and I cant wait for more, I wonder whats going on with Prowl... And Hazard... So cruel. Thats all I can say about him. There is too much to say and I don't want to bore you with words, but I really can't wait for the next chapter! Really looking forward to it!

Well... after hearing Lockdown's side of the story... I really have no sympathy for him, I could really care less about him or how he feels with his guilt (He could got to the pit, really would make me feel better) and I agree with Ratchet's side of finding another way to be my look on things. I understand that trying to do something for someone else even if it might have some negative impact. But if I was in Sunstreaker's place, I would have preferred to die with the enhancer thing then actually go through what he did. I mean, what if it didn't work, then it would mean having going through all that torture for nothing. So dying from it or finding another way would be my priorities in that situation.

Anyways, those are my thoughts on the situation. To the whole chapter, I really liked it. Despite learning Lockdown's reasons that still did not make me feel anything for him anyways. I still liked it. I am also curious to what is going on with Prowl. I hope they are alright, and Chromedome, I liked him. Either way, the story kept me hooked as always and I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks!

P.S. I expect Crawler to pay still, death is the only thing he should expect for his future.

Omg, amazing. Please right more.

Hey! It's great that your still continuing this, I was almost worried you would drop this story. Anyways, it was just as exciting as the other chapters, and the added crime plot was awesome! (I love crime, so it was an added bonus) I did almost cry with what happened to Sunstreaker here, to feel he was almost free to only end up being raped and was still alive instead of the freedom of death. I could really feel for him there, and felt like peeling Crawlers armor off peice by peice, while burning his optics out and his private parts... And other things I will not mention. Though the relief I felt when he was saved was a great feeling. You know, that's what I love with the story, to be able to feel the character and his struggles within the story, really great job with that aspect. Also want to say that I hope that everyone that hurt Sunstreaker gets what's going to them, I know revenge doesn't improve things, but hell! It makes you feel better! I also want to add that this was another great chapter to a great story!

I'm sorry. I needed to comment on the lucid ignoramus that decided that they were going to make TWO boring long-ass irrelevant comments on your amazing story.

What I find ironic is that that particular loser is commenting on the fact that you lack logic when the majority of his/her statements are nowhere near based in reality.

I usually don't report comments because I think all are valid, but I did report him/her. There's nothing wrong with using cliches, there's nothing wrong with your characters being OOC (if they are. I'm not knowledgeable about Transformers, but that doesn't mean that I don't enjoy it), there's nothing wrong with your descriptions or shaping a story in the way that you wanted it to be. Common sense would tell a rational person that it's because it is a FANFICTION-people make things up all the time.

I hope you ignore his/her idiotic comments as being irrelevant and don't take them to heart. The fact that s/he probably reported your story out of spite while cowardly hiding behind the reason that this site does not allow porn/adult situations shows how much of a pussy that person is. I believe that this is true simply because of his/her prejudiced comments on incestual relationships (whether people agree or not, the fact that should be focused on is that if the two people are of age, it should be no one's business) and insinuating that you are a pedophile (pretty sure those two bots are of age).

Again, I loved the story. Keep going however you want. :D

So this isn't over then? Awesome. Or maybe it's leading to a sequel. Great story. :)

WHAT!? Please update!

When will we get ch 11?

Oh my god I have to see if Sides gets to Sunny. I have to see what happens to Lockdown. I'm crying please finish this agdjfjahkslflcdp

Woo, that was a twist. Please update soon. I'm so into this story.

Oh, this is very good. The plot is very good and I have seen other stories with the twins being slipt at birth and then they try to find each other. But your story is the best I have read, your writing style is great, easy to read, though sometimes long. But I guess that legthens the chapter and lots of readers like that, thats just my point of view. Something I have a habit of is reading reviews before the story to see what the readers thought. What I get... Is... Some flamer? (I think that's what they are called, but what my friends call them, trolls. They are most likely the same thing).Really have no idea what they are trying to do... Really dont. But I wouldn't listen to them, there are many more out there, they are just one little speck compared to the many. Plus, with someone complaining about one story so much... And so much... Really have no idea how to critique... Or Review nicely, maybe they had a tough life and need to lighten up. Either way, don't listen. I loved your story and would love to see the next chapters, please continue, many readers are waiting.