Reviews for The Gun Show
ttandme69 chapter 11 . 4/15/2017
Any chance of you finishing this story?
Hope6968 chapter 11 . 2/7/2017
Totally wonderful. Thank you, Hope
Riellebrat chapter 11 . 12/27/2015
Oh this story could've gone on and on with no crime LOL
and I totally agree with another review
"ohhhhh as they race upstairs for round 1 lol ty 4 a great story i loved it im picturing a ME wearing a holster and not much else."

Now that image is a a story in itself!
Madbadger chapter 11 . 4/28/2015
Brilliant just brilliant.
AnSaMo chapter 4 . 4/20/2015
Sorry, I need to say it! Ana Santos, really? This is me! XD. Great story!
crime fictiction chapter 11 . 4/20/2015
ohhhhh as they race upstairs for round 1 lol ty 4 a great story i loved it im picturing a ME wearing a holster and not much else.
crime fictiction chapter 10 . 4/20/2015
very hot for maura to have a gun
crime fictiction chapter 9 . 4/9/2015
lol have fun but next its the engagement
crime fictiction chapter 8 . 4/5/2015
fear did of losing the friendship
Guest chapter 7 . 4/4/2015
Enjoying your story, however, while I hate being "that guy," the term "gypsy" is considered by many people to be an ugly ethnic slur for the Romany people. While Jane might not realize that, it is hard to believe Maura wouldn't, and it is jarring to see her use the term.
nursethescreens chapter 7 . 4/4/2015
Really?! Wow the suspense is killing me as much as Jane, but love that you actually have a decent plot and full story line this is a great story pleeeeease writ more soon. Love and gratitude.
crime fictiction chapter 7 . 4/4/2015
you tell me ur the detective lol
Guest chapter 6 . 4/3/2015
I am really enjoying this story. I love it when Maura and Jane just go for it instead of waiting for 15-20 chapters before they even confess their feelings.
crime fictiction chapter 6 . 4/3/2015
woooohooooo dangerous game and maura struggles to stand up and get back to work to stop thinking about tonights activites she throbs between her legs and shivers with delight, unlocking door and blinds work starts lol
alays 59 chapter 6 . 4/3/2015
merci pour cette belle suite ;)
hâte de lire le prochain chapitre :)
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