Amazing writing, perfect.

Wow...I love this outside perspective of the friendship between Anakin and Obi-Wan. It's is so beautifully written. :)

I really loved the idea of this fic. . And bail's pov was amazing .
I really liked his insight, and his view. and the name of the fic was brilliant, it's a very good fit.
Keep up the good work and have Nice day.

Oh my, that's a sad ending, especially because it's correct. You've highlighted an aspect of the relationship between Obi-Wan and Anakin that many people seem to overlook. The external POV is a great way to explore this sort of thing, and you've done a really good job here. Very well written and believable.

You have nailed each of these characters in all their simplicity and complexity. Wonderfully done.

This was wonderful. Well written and it was unique to see their relationship (and the future foreshadowing) viewed from the perspective of an outsider. Now I want to read the book you based this piece on!