damnit. the story is great and i hoped to read more chapter.

isn't kurenai a genjutsu specialist

Ya know, I always thought of Hinata as Being a 1st Water Type and a 2nd Lightning Type, with the Rest of the Hyuga's being 1st Earth Types and 2nd Fire Types.

Fem Haku please.

near the end you have ... ...

STATS:
NAME: Naruto Uzumaki
RANK: Academy student
LV: 9

But it should be ... ...

STATS:
NAME: Naruto Uzumaki
*RANK: Genin* (this needs to be changed)
LV: 9

you say who when you mene how

Hmm so the fourth girl hasn't appeared in the story yet I would've like for Naruto to be pair with Karin an Uzumaki I may add since he was to deal with Hinata

I like the conversation between Zabuza and Naruto that an aspect I like

Wow Naruto instantly knows it's Haku behind the based on voice. Seriously you know ANBU conceal voices so you can't recognize them by voice. Naruto using his biju cloak in front of Choji you might as well just write that the Sandaime announces it to the whole village the way you going by keep it a secret in your story LOL

I seriously doubt Zabuza is good enough to handle two Jonins in a fight when barely could handle Kakashi by himself. I find Naruto learning to cut a leaf in what 3 days hilarious when it took how many clones to do it in how much time seriously it points like that are head scratchers. The scene with Haku was even necessary since it didn't have the life changing aspect it had in the series you know the 'when you have someone or something to protect is when you become truly strong'.

You should write Asuma testing their chakra affinity and not just saying like he knows. BTW Hinata is Fire, Shikamaru is Earth and as you know Naruto is Wind just thought I'd provide that tidbit. Also it's EXTREMELY unbelievable that Kurenai would survive a fight with Zabuza the way the series Team 7 did. Seriously she isn't even a 30 in the data book during Part 1 and Kakashi is a 33 while Asuma and Guy are 31.5

I read this to get a glimpse of what might be coming up so I hope when you write Naruto allowing Tenten and her father who he doesn't even know nor has a great relationship with as Ernest to use the Uzumaki scrolls for weapons that you write him telling them that they are forbidden from sharing the secrets and gets a percentage of profits from weapons made through the Uzumaki forging process. It's what any clan would do nothing is free in this world unless your an idiot and naive because learning forging isn't compensation enough as you know she shouldn't have even asked him since it's asking an Akimichi for the three colored pills or an Aburame their silk procuring process

Well, while I see it done nicely I just don't like when other people get chakra affinities when they didn't originally. Mainly Shikamaru because of his clans techniques, same as Hinata. Which leads to the "problem" of this chapter; why give them main fire affinities?

who? or how? your english teacher must be having hard time with you
I can understand that English is not your native language but get a beta reader to correct you

Sequel, please

Poor Hina-chan. ;)