Very nicely done. I love Maureen chewing Elliot out. I like how you have Elliot's apology, his profession of love, his framing of her as also his family...I love that those are simple, short, declarative sentences.

And I love them sitting quietly...them still having that comfort.

So so good! You really captured them... maybe the forgiveness was a little quick, I would have expected her to be more guarded, given how he hurt her. Would have liked you to explore that. Plus would have made for longer story and build up.

I love this! Excellent writing.

Your penname sounds like a mana song.

Beautiful! I imagine that this is the end though huh? Either way, should you continue or not, it's a bittersweet read!

I love this story so far. I saw you posted in Twittee that you had a new story but I am a huge EO shipper so I has to read this one again.

This was a beautiful story and excellent writing. It was so sweet. I always hear the Warren Leight won't bring Elliot back because how could he explain his absence. But I would tell Warren to check out some Fanfics like yours to get the story right.

Now this is what you call an in a nut shell story!Fantastic writing,you give us the true essence of Elliot and Olivia's relationship through the years in just six chapters!This was so great,thank you love it. Bensler Forever.

The end? No, I want more. Maybe a sequel? I enjoyed the flashbacks and it added a bit of closure to my wonderings about Olivia's relationship with the children. I'm glad he's putting her first for once, and that he's doing so with his children's blessing. I loved your first EO story and hope you write more of them.

Fantastic finish to and amazing and beautifully written story,it was intense,emotional,heartbreaking,deep and poetic all at the same you so much,this was truly beautiful,loved it. EOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEO..FOREVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!

This was perfect! Could feel the love the two have for each other.

They are home for each other. I love this story.

Well, this was sad and painful. But it was also well-written even with all the confusing changes in fonts, time changes, poetry or song lyrics, etc. I followed along. They covered an awful lot in just one night.

Raw, haunting, emotional, & beautifully written. The brokenness & pain is very true to them & their relationships. One of my favorites, simply because it feels real & because it makes me cry.

I read it before,couldn't help myself,this story is fantastic,your writing of our favorite characters is nothing short of brilliant.I am so happy that Elliot pulled out all stops in getting everything that happened with him out their,I especially loved that he is not backing down from Olivia,he got her to confess what REALLY happened to her with Lewis,and I have to say that Elliot being able to do this is a sure sign of recovery for both of deep,intense and emotional story,very realistic and believable scenes between them,your writing is truly amazing,thank you loved it. EOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEO..FOREVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!