What was her decision, will she and the doc settle down...please continue have been enjoying the story, but would like to see a conclusion...

Love this story your writing and dialogue is so authentic to the show we all miss and love. Hopefully there will be an update soon and I would love to see you write one with John and Teyla becoming a couple.

Awesome, really enjoying this:)

Well done. You seem to understand just how it feels to be a clone, is there something you are not telling us?
Nice to have the story moving again. Keep up the good work.

Nice chapter.
Dr White is an Ass ;-)

Love it

Nice chapter.
Good to see Carson didn't get his hand chopped off.

This is an excellent Carson story, however, I've been reading, waiting for my favorite character, John Sheppard, to show up, as I'd thought he would. Got one line in in this chapter from him! I'm being very honest when I say this is really an interesting story, and I'll continue to read it as it comes out. But without Sheppard and team in it, I probably won't have any more reviews to write.
I have to add that I wrote this after already reviewing chapter 18, so I just copied and pasted it here in order to get it posted. I never really liked the 'only one review per chapter' rule...

Sad chapter...

Not to whine, but now five chapters in, I'm wondering when my fave team and in particular, my fave colonel, come into play..okay, okay...a little whiny..but you do have John as one of your featured characters...;)

.hmm. Keeping things tense..what with the radio static and then Tamsin falliIng...you had me thinking all hell was breaking loose, before you actually ended this chapter with a cliffie! While I really like Lorne...I'm missing my fave team! Wondering why, Tamsin hasn't crossed paths with my fave team..is this intentional? Not a criticism..just wondering!

Already liking Tamsin, Can't wait to see what's in store for her!

Sorry to hear that you've had dramas in real life to deal with. Hopefully things are a bit better now. Its good that you can prioritise your life - I know too many people that keep going as normal and burn out. All the best to you and looking forward to the next chapter! :3

I thank you for popping in to let us know. I appreciate that.

Take care of your own stuff first. We can wait! I think I can safely say that we are looking forward to the next chapter!

I have literally checked every single day to see if the next chapter is up. This is awesome.