I liked this! Thanks for sharing your writing!

I'm cracking up right because when I read the part "hey leggo" I thought it said "hey Lego" like he Saw an actual Lego cause he is hallucinating (then again its the middle of the night I could be having the hallucinating instead but oh well) cause of the heat. Besides that I thought it was really sweet and just saying I don't review very much I only do a few that I really like. And I really like this story. So thanks for making this amazingly cute adorable story. - love Turtles

...I don't get it

Oh boy, Jack was totally delirious. Mildly confusing at the first part however because I was wondering if the Moon actually spoke to him, but then again this is where Jack is delirious. Lol.

is your username by any chance a reference to something because osnapitz just reminded me of somethin or nevermind entirely

Great story!