Nicely done! Great grammar and plot :)

I know this is really old, but that last line killed me!

I love it!I ship them so hard!Even when you write it not meaning it that way!

That was so sad, but also sweet how Natsu and Gray spoke to each other. I loved this story so much!

Well, I'm a sucker for hurt/comfort fics involving Gray and Natsu, so I guess I have to like this just on principle. It's well-written, and I like how Gray and Natsu can have a kind of heart-to-heart while pretty much staying in character. I think they have a very interesting friendship, and it's nice to see it explored some more. Anyway, you did a good job : )

I don't know what I want to say about this OS but it made me feel very well, don't know why or how, but beautifully written!

starting with "im cold", you just know that gray's not feeling well xD. Shows how Natsu's presence is able to cheer up gray, even just a little bit and a heartwarming moment between Natsu and Gray really shows their bestfriend-itudeness,

My OTP. That made me feel all warm inside. I loved it.

oh my god the feels! this was honestly one of the most beautiful things I've ever read :') I wish they had a scene like this in the manga! (sure there was that Juvia x Gray thing which was beautiful) but if this happened I'd dissolve into a blubbering mess lol you did an amazing job capturing their feelings after the Tartaros Arc (especially since they did experience the same loss)! I look forward to reading more from you! :D

Aww. I feel so sorry for those two. I can't wait to see Gray show up again in the manga. Loved this fanfic! XD

I loved it, thanks :)

Wow, you are really a mean author when it comes to Gray. It cannot be helped, though (since Gray is destined to lose everything precious before his eyes).
And here comes Natsu, for making everything better for our ice mage.
I like how Natsu shows his compassionate side towards Gray (considering both of them have lost their fathers in Tartaros arc). He can be considerate if he wants, I presume.