I don’t have a problem with Assassin’s creed cross over but why is it in naruto section just because your oc named naruto that doesn’t have any relation with the naruto verse i am not saying the story is bad it is pretty good but why naruto and the author is not the first one to do so just transfer it to assassin’s creed section

A year of no updates. Really sad to see such an interesting story die out.

keep up the good work. I hope to see a update soon

updated please

Naruto was walking home. He was in the park and played with her friend Barbara... This is one example of the errors I've found so far. I'm like 4 paragraphs in. This is rewritten, you said?

You can't spell cigarettes. Seriously, sigarets? I tried to get past the horrible writing but i just can't. if this is the rewrite i don't want to think about what the original looks like.
It's a shame. this concept seemed interesting.

You didn't improve the writing much :)

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.

dear writer please make more chapters

re loco amigo

Hey we haven't seen a whole lot of lex's assistant. When will the android pop back into the story? A spy is very useful after all.

Please update

Honestly mate. This is an amazing story and has soo much potential. The only thing that somewhat kills it are the grammar and punctuation errors. I ain't saying I'm quitting this fix cause I'm sure as hell gonna keep reading it. But still mate the errors are just off

The new beta isn’t as good as your old one with translations

Love the assassins creed/Naruto/Young Justice crossover