I love Dramione! So I love this fanfic!

Bloody funny! :D That was hilarious LOL! He's just about whipped.

yo i really hate this i am Dramione shipper till i die and i only enjoy happy ending bullshit so this rebound thing literally is a boner killer to my imaginary dick... yeah fix this i need to know what the fuck happens

Ive never seen Draco as Hermione's rebound before, and I love it. I expect Ron to act a little differently, but it was all in good fun. Draco bein a virgin is great, pretty much fits my headcanon about him. Hermione losing her virginity to Krum as well, she is pretty much 16 by then, after all. In any way, it was a really fun read, and that ending, it fits his personality so well

Rebound-Dramione, I think don't I've ever seen that before (but then again, I don't often read Dramione). But I think you had them mostly in character, they were both trying to not let the other get the upper hand in the conversation. I seems extremely OOC though for Hermione to lose her virginity at fourteen - especially in a library. And wasn't sixth year the year Draco spent all of his time plotting to kill Dumbledore? I also would have expected a stronger reaction from Ron, being the hot-headed person that he is. But overall, I think I liked this.

NO NO DRACO LOVES HER AND SHE LOVES HIM FORGET RON FORGET PANSY NOOO

Okay, okay, okay, you did actually get me to buy Dramione. I don't know how you achieved this Herculean feat, but you are the only one that has ever made a solid case for them in my eyes. Here, have a whole truck of chocolate frogs.

As for the fic itself... I would have liked to see how it actually happened, as you don't really give much detail on that front, and tbh, that was the part I wanted to see most. It's a bit weird that Hermione would've lost it at 14, as this seems a bit young for someone like her, not to mention she didn't even know Krum that long, but hey, who else would she have done it with? You worked with what you had. It was a bit strange to see Draco as a virgin too, as he always left me with the impression he used his status to get laid a lot :D. But it works, I bought it. What I didn't buy was Ron's reaction. 'Oh'? No way. He would've pulled out his wand or yelled his head off, at least. And he just left? Without so much as a scowl? This is something minor, I know, but it's the only thing I disliked about the story.

Hermione's reaction however, I loved. Same goes for Draco's. Very in character for both, so I really enjoyed the last bits. I have to say, you really had me holding my breath at some parts. The sexual tension was so thick I could cut it with a knife! Absolutely loved it. That is not to say I do not love the rest of it was well, because I do. It was very well written and believable, and like I said, the first Dramione in the history of ever that I liked. Well done, Madam.

Good job, Lizzie! I like it, although it's kinda sudden.

Haha, you have talent. You had me read a Dramione story and not instantly hate it! Also, your working title is fantastic :P

But really, the banter is great, and Hermione not being a virgin while Draco is and the shock it induced might just be one of my favourite things ever :D The ending was good, and I like how you finished it off.

That you didn't make it a RomeoJuliet-esque drama is great, and I actually kinda found myself rooting for them...ish. XD

So you're telling me that Draco is a virgin and Hermione shagged Mr. Bulgarian Bonbon at the library because that's just so fantastic! I never saw it coming and I was like 'whaat? oh my god oh my god' and smiled like a fool.
The dialogue between Hermione and Draco was very lively, I really enjoyed reading it and I was holding my breath and waiting what will they say next. It was also funny to read when Hermione said Draco's name and I just imagined her face and Draco's face and...! Ah, I love this!
Great job!

Hey

Dramione is my OTP and I loathe how some people write them but this was one of my favourite ever. The banter was spot on and the few breaks in brackets where we see into Draco's head were spectacular.

Just a nitpick, Hermione was 14 when she went to the dance with Krum. As far as canon Hermione goes, that's a little OOC for my tastes, but I liked the dynamic it created.

-Ciao Mate

I like that working title haha. I was like holding my breath and thinking 'jut a rebound, just a rebound' and as you didn't specifiy, but eluded to it, I'll believe that Hermione is in love with Ron (forever woot).

I did quite enjoy the bickering though, and I liked that there was Ron-ness in this. I like Dramione's like this, I think :)

Well done!

I love this Dramione so much. I like the opening. I like their banter and teasing. I like Draco's virgin confession and Hermione's non-virgin confession. And then eventually they agree that they actually are "seeing each other". But the ending kind of surprised me. Ron and Lavender actually walk up on them in a compromising position, and Hermione takes the moment to kiss Draco in front of them? And then Ron and Lavender slink off with no reaction besides whispering. And then Draco makes a comment about Pansy? If you clear the ending up, then I would love you. Great Dramione :)

Oh, I was actually liking Hermione and Draco together in this (which is not something that happens often) and thought they were sorta liking each other more than Pansy and Ron... but they were just together because they didn't have the ones they liked.

I think you got Draco very in character. He wasn't soppy and romantic and annoying (some people just shouldn't write him) you got him very in character which I'm relieved about.

I really enjoyed this story but feel bad for the ending where Hermione just kissed him because of Ron watching. Poor Draco.

You really got their voices in their bantering, which was great. I could almost picture them bickering about stuff in the library like this, and the part at the end was almost funny, it practically had a punch line. There were a couple things with SPaG, but I liked this.