Reviews for Broken Shell
Guest chapter 15 . 7/16/2015
Love Vs speech too bad chris didn't say that to Peirs in the game ugh getting sad again lol but love all the fluff going on here it looks like peirs arm is almost healed. This isn't the last chapter right? Dang every time I see or hear bear I'm gonna think of chris lol
Guest chapter 14 . 7/16/2015
So V always had one eye only? And dang he got deployed really fast after dropping Peirs off. I'm impressed and jealous these two can run a mile just like that but then again that's what you get with a lot of hard work. And yay he can see again:)
Guest chapter 13 . 7/16/2015
So this is how military guys flirt with each other lol that was random how chris got that fever poor Hope she wants to tag along
Guest chapter 12 . 7/16/2015
Well glad things worked out here I thought though both peirs parents knew he has a thing for Chris lol
Guest chapter 11 . 7/16/2015
Mrs Nivans is a boss love her !
Guest chapter 11 . 7/16/2015
Ms Nivans is a boss love her!
Guest chapter 10 . 7/16/2015
So that's why there was a storm approaching I hope chris and peirs make up. And how dare peirs father say that chris wanted to go back for peirs but peirs didn't want to go because he didn't want to hurt him... At least peirs mom is more understanding. Also chris owes V an apology lol
Guest chapter 9 . 7/15/2015
That last sentence is troubling and love the adoriableness of these two
Guest chapter 8 . 7/15/2015
Uh oh hopefully he doesn't get mad lol at least they know peirs is alive but not what he use to be and omg peirs just pouncing on chris hecka hot
Guest chapter 7 . 7/15/2015
In impressed peirs still ate that pasta lol and dang chris V could of ended you and Vs gadgets for peirs are awesome. I love how when Alpha team shows support for people they do thumbs ups
Guest chapter 6 . 7/15/2015
Gotta give credit to those new alpha team guys they don't know peirs but there so kind to him. I hope V won't stab them in the back I'm curious how he has experienced with mutations in the first place
Guest chapter 5 . 7/15/2015
I love the quotes you put at the beginning of each chapter. Peirs with glasses is a sexy image and go jake for standing up and protecting peirs
Guest chapter 4 . 7/15/2015
Oh my gee too cute! That nightmare in the beginning was horrifying I thought they were just pranking chris till everyone looked sad. You know I wouldn't be surprised if that variation of the Enhance C virus was ment for the Ustanilk it did have a messing arm and it looked like it had bad Vision .
Guest chapter 3 . 7/15/2015
I love your explanation for peirs mutated arm it makes since the c virus is known and named for its cocooning properties. I love how peirs and hope know each other already I guess that's why she didn't run away from chris when chris was trying to get her attention
Guest chapter 2 . 7/15/2015
Please tell me there NOT going to cut it off lol I know peirs looks different with that arm but idk lol love the loyalty of Chris's men don't question why there caring someone with a mutated appendage to a helicopter. And poor peirs...
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