Oh what can I say this was amazing. I loved it from beginning to end. It was just the perfect blend of Cartson. You kept the characters true to themselves. Also I have to say that Jack better freaking still be alive for season 3. There is no doubt in my mind that Cartson is endgame. Their chemistry is too off the charts to waste it on a blah no passion story line like Peggysou. I don't know why tptb made that happen in season 2. However I still feel there is hope for our ship. Especially when we have brilliant writers like this to keep the SHIP sailing strong. Please create more brilliant and intriguing adventures like this one for everyone's (or what I wish was) AC addictive to watch couple. i have to say that Agent Ramirez has the worst timing ever. How about we pick up this scenario with an Alternate ENDING where he doesn't interrupt our beloved Cartson...Cartson forever and 10 stars to you for an outstanding, compelling and powerful ff about them

This was rather delicious, however I felt that it left us hanging. A bit disappointed we didn't get to see more of an attempt of the full press, for I wanted to see the aftermath, I did really like this version and thus would like to have both in existance. Sooo I guess I put out there the ida for a new story. One where he does give her the full press (or at least some brutality of a press where there are clear marks showing) and then a multichapter story of how the other collegues treat the both of them, and how they further treat them after she gets cleared for acts and is still around the srr. And of course how jack is dealing with it through out and how carter views him afterwards (I would assume she wouldn't take the offense, but he would definately feel guilt and remorse amoung other things). Sooo tada. Thanks.

I really loved this and wish there was more...BUT my first reaction was: How did Ramirez get in? Jack had locked it! They were alone (oooh! hahaha) so as soon as he opened the door I was instantly thinking "What? How'd that happen?" otherwise this was really great!

Aaahhhh I loved it! So good. This ship crept up on me and I can't get enough of it right now!

Well that could've been awkward to walk into.

This paragraph made me wet tbh

"He'd thought so many times about making her moan, scream, beg, even – but not in pain, never in pain. He never wanted to leave a single mark on her soft white skin – well, faint marks on her neck from his mouth, perhaps, subtle signs of her ownership, maybe even the shadow of his fingers on her hips or thighs, a match for the scratches that her long nails would undoubtedly leave on his own skin, but never had he thought of touching her with the intention of causing her pain."

:D

I surely hope you write more of this story! It has amazing potential.

make a story out of this pleaseee

I love this! I wished they had taken it a step further in the show but not too far. I like what you did here, you stayed true to both characters and added more drama to the scene. Really fun read.

Love the story!

Why do you tease us like this? This can not be a one shot! I wanna know what the development is.

I don't care fit Thompson as a general rule, but i do like the way you wrote him here.

OH MY GOD this was incredible

more like this, please, I nearly died from the sexual tension

I love your Cartson fics! Keep em' coming!