I loved it now I really wish it was more of a story of how they met, how they became lovers just everything leading up to this moment

I actually really love the idea of Luffy being the bumper between Zoro and Sanji and also that's the first fic I found that actually focussed on their relationship rather than some plotless smut - which is nice for a change (not that I mind the smut but ya know ;D).
I just love these three so much and seeing them loving each other warms my heart.
Thank you for this lovely fic! /thumbs up

I love this threesome pairing. They are just so perfect for each other and I think you did a great job writing them. However I would recommend you going over your grammar and spelling check again, there weren't many but I found some mistakes.
Anyway I would love to read more stories with this pairing~ thanks for writing

This was a nice story, thank you!

The setting was nice and the pacing of the story spot on. It was never too rushed or too slow, and you set the story well. The story was emotionally charged, and that was lovely, and it was nicely detailed.

There were a few grammar and spelling errors, and a few sentences felt a little short, which made it clunky in a few places. It would have been nicer to see deeper interaction with the characters and more emotion in a few places (Sanji and Zoro for example could have used some more development and interaction), and in some places it was more tell than show, but it didn’t detract from the overall picture. There was also a lot of epithets, which can detract from a story.

Overall, this was a nice, deep story, and showed well the relationships between these characters.

Best wishes!