Reviews for Of Parallel Lines and Intersections
Mendokuzai21 chapter 2 . 11/29/2019
love it! really love it. you change Hinata's characteristics but i can still feel its her. you explained it very well why she changed and glad you make it Hinata who found Naruto not the opposite.

i want more, lol
Gomizia chapter 3 . 4/19/2018
that was so adorable! ㅠㅠ more please please please..
Gomizia chapter 2 . 4/18/2018
I always love this kind of stories, you know, like how konoha 9 kids team up to survive world apocalypse or the end of the world.
And this is a fresh breath of Hinata. I like your hinata in this. Great work!
Gomizia chapter 1 . 4/18/2018
i'm cracking up at Kiba's typos! XD (his texts in general are funny though)
Great work!
Anon chapter 3 . 3/28/2018
Popping back in to read some of your NaruHina stories because the way you wrote their characters is just so on point! Happy to see you writing again even if it is for another series. I'm hesitant to read your kachako stories because I'm sure they'll make me fall in love with that pairing! I hope that you will write NaruHina stories again too!
Usa-chan chapter 3 . 2/28/2017
Don't worry! Your slowness is worth it since you always deliver beautiful stories! Nice touch with The Gutsy Ninja movie.
And yes, they are utterly perfect for each other!
Usa-chan chapter 1 . 2/28/2017
This AU is so precious.
Haibara chapter 3 . 7/23/2016
Really loved the different storylines, and the explanation into Naruto and Hinata's vulnerabilities. I think the "neighbors" story line is cutest so far, but I also really like Sasuke's character in the "Infected"chapter. Hope that you one day decide to continue with these. I'm following this story in hopes that that may happen. _

Best to you!
claire-and-elide chapter 1 . 5/29/2016
naruto you sly dog casually scoping out if hinata had a boyfriend or not. best part of the whole fic. team 8 brotp yay!
Beatrizmar chapter 3 . 4/18/2016
i loved them all. excellent writing and good stories. Pls continue!
Raine Wintermoon chapter 3 . 11/4/2015
Okay, before anything else, I apologize for leaving reviews on every chapter — I'm just entranced by the way you write, the way you tell the story, and the way you characterized. Out of the three one-shots here, this chapter is probably my favorite as of the moment. I like how throughout, it was indirectly being narrated by Naruto; from his embarrassment, to his insecurities, and everything else. Every quip is very Naruto-like and the continuous (breathless?) phrases he speaks shows that silly, child-like personality of his. Plus, it shows how NaruHina functions. No matter how "limited" the build-up of their relationship in the canon, there's no denying how those "limited" screen times hold much heavier and meaningful to both of them that it's enough to see that they're very much suited for each other. The empathy, the understanding, the genuineness are what shapes them and they both needed that — and that's why I love NaruHina. There's no brash putting on pedestal and "I'm better than you are"'s but respect and admiration. That's why I came up with the answer that you are one of the few people who manage to capture their beauty (of course, this is debatable and clearly personal in my part).

P.S. Those exchanges between Naruto and Sasuke are absolutely dorky and entertaining. NaruSasu brotp for life, lol. :)
Raine Wintermoon chapter 2 . 11/4/2015
The first chapter was lighthearted and cute, then the second was like a leap from it. You had me in a roller coaster of emotions. The subtle (and not so subtle) implications of their relationship and lines in canon are really nice (you've been doing that since the first chapter, haha), it hurts so good. And I thought of Hinata likewise (for heaven's sake, Team 8 could be the most brutal in terms of fighting if given the chance). Their differences in personality is a breath of fresh air.
Raine Wintermoon chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
Everything is so cute and funny in this chapter! I was smiling so wide, my cheeks hurt, while I try to conceal my squeals. It didn't help that Naruto is such a cutie that I can read Hinata's thoughts in my mind. Seriously, the humor is spot-on—and that "getting attacked by larvae" line of Kiba's is my last straw. Additionally, I like how you incorporated Hinata's favorite hobby! Something that most people who wrote her would often forget (or did not know!). I'm putting this in my fave because my smile is currently unerasable and you're awesome like that. :)
AmethystQtpie chapter 3 . 10/17/2015
love the fact that your stories are all long _
guedesbrawl chapter 2 . 9/10/2015
This chapter is simply amazing.

I'd have loved to see a bigger story based on these ideas... a pity this will most likely stay as a one shot.

Keep up the good work. Between this and Consolation Prize, i'm expecting great things from you
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