Is this seriously what your 'crappy' stories are like? It's honestly better than anything I will ever be able to write. I get wanting to better yourself, but please don't slander(if that word can be used in this context) your own work so much! So you have even better stories, that doesn't make the older ones bad! All your stories I've read have been awesome! And I'm adding this bit because I do it in almost every review and I haven't gotten an answer, will you please consider continuing your story "The Lonely" if you get the time and inspiration? Oh, and "You get what you want" too. (I think that's what it's called, I'm not too sure. I mean the story with Belladona Potter. Keep up the good work and thanks for the amazing content!️

Goddamn why are you bring in anti-abortion propoganda in

Loved it

I know the ryme bye baby bunting differently. I know it as "Bye baby bunting, daddys gone a hunting, to fetch a little rabbit's skin to wrap bye baby bunting in" but tbh i like urs better as it is more kid frendly and doesn't talk about skinning bunnies

Oh, it was so sweet! Honestly, I think placing the warning degrading your work at the begining was not a good idea - I almost didn't read because of how you talked about your own work. I mean, I understand the feeling, I have stories I wrote 10 years ago that make me cringe, but I guess it's part of our development and it's not like this work here is crap. Maybe you should expose how you feel about ir at the end, I dunno. Anyway, I enjoyed it! It was a light reading and seriously, I've seen waaay to much bad writing/timing/plotting/development to know yours is better than a lot!
Bye :)

You suck at writing.

I have read this book like a billion times and I still love it

Gracias es muy ligero a comparación de otros. ...por eso me gustó mucho.

Saludos desde México abril 2020

So cute

great story thanks for sharing it with us

Ooooh bringing politics into this? Onviously if a male is pregnant, and didn't realise males could get pregnant in the magical world, he should be allowed to have an abortion. How was he to know?! No one, especially a 17 year old, should be FORCED to have a baby WTF. Even if it was an accidental night of passion, no one should shave to give up their body and autonomy to house a fetus who's literally uncaring to whether it lives or dies haha. Souls are pure energy. That human soul will just be reborn in another body. Science dictates that no energy can be created or destroyed, it only moves form.

Technically *drawing out the word* you kinda did professor quirell ring any bells?

Ha! if only people really knew what the song ring around the roses was talking about. it's kind of morbid when you really think about it. For your information boysgirls its talking about the bubonic plague aka the black death. it talks about the stages. stage 1: ring around the roses meaning round circles the color of pink or red s. pocket full of posies stage 2 meaning people walked around with those flowers in their pockets (self explanatory) stage 3: ashes ashes we all fall down meaning the skin turns grey and they all fall down? well your dead.

Mmm, the pro-life part was just so unnecessary. Harry is dark but pro-life...

OMG THIS STORY WAS JUST SO CUTE