Always love fluffy Harmony stories, and these have been great!

A interesting story. This was enjoyable to read as you write about Harry and Hermione's time together. I like the way you describe each situation and make it look beautiful in its own way. The interaction between the two was very endearing as well and could feel the love that comes off the two. The chapters connect smoothly with one another and cannot wait to see what you will come up with next. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

Mmmm... dancing in the rain with Hermione! Very adorable! :D

I'm liking this story, its sweet.

sweet moment

Never ever apologise for using a great line... ;-)

More yummy Harmony fluff. Delicious.

super cute!

This was very sweet.

AW!

This sounds like a good story. Please continue. Harry and Hermione forever.

Aaaaw! Another adorable Harmony moment... :D

Excellent short one-shot.
Now try doing it in 100 words and then we'll call it a drabble... ;-)

Awe! This was absolutely fabulous. I've never even really considered Harry and Hermione together, always thinking of their relationship as a sibling-like one, but you made me like it here. This was so sweet and your use of the prompt was wonderful. I'll look forward to reading the next :)

I love your description of the "night dressed in the black dress of a sky..." This line is beautiful! I love this drabble! It's so cute, and I can definitely see the two of them sitting there. The last line is really powerful and very sweet and I think it's a great way to end it.

The only con-crit I would have is to practice your grammar. :) For example, dialogue has commas and not periods: "I never knew stargazing would be this much fun," he said.

I can't wait to see what you come up with for the other four!