Reviews for Side Effects of Superstrength
Sakuragane San chapter 6 . 10/25/2018
He did that for who?
The Ancient Phoenix chapter 9 . 7/24/2018
I am amused
The Ancient Phoenix chapter 7 . 7/24/2018
The car one might be my fav because Mattie gets to show off
found my cringe account killme chapter 1 . 3/11/2018
how about a mini series when Alfred gets scared and accidentally hurts one of the countries with his strength. He falls into a mini depression, but in a couple of weeks, said country is healed, but is scared of America. Then America becomes more depressed, and Italy helps him out (suprising but it fits)
Amelia chapter 8 . 2/1/2018
Oh I love this so much
Amelia chapter 2 . 2/1/2018
Oh this is so adorable. You don't read to many fanfics
about Alfred's superstrength and it's nice to see some stuff about it in his everyday life. It's really interesting to me that you had Alfred talk to the horse but Arthur not thinking it would understand. I've always had the headcanon that Alfred was more in touch with nature than somes of the other nations so it's really nice to see sone of that in this story. I love this a lot and can't wait to read more of it!
Polly Little chapter 1 . 6/4/2017
Getting run through is a flesh wound? Wow.
dbcr226 chapter 7 . 4/2/2017
So Matt can turn this invisible now? I love it!
camry72 chapter 1 . 3/18/2017
Yeah. Angry America is scary enough.
GenericUsername01 chapter 1 . 1/16/2017
Okay I was just thinking about how the other nations would have found out about his superstrength. Like Prussia having to painstakingly teach him how NOT to break every musket he fires, them getting in arguments about his strength could too be used against him and he needs to learn to control it, and Prussia proving it by still beating the gangly little preteen every time they spar

Also just having it casually come up at America's first ever world meeting or something, just for the other nations reactions. Because what does it say about this ex-colony's potential if he can do things like that? There's sort of an unspoken implication there, and the older and more experienced nations would have realized that

I realize this is meant to be a lighthearted fic lol but superstrength has some pretty serious side effects and connotations too
GenericUsername01 chapter 8 . 1/16/2017
I love this, and I love the headcanon that Matthew can turn things invisible. I rarely see Al's superstrength acknowledged in fics, and not only did you write one solely about that, but you included Matt's invisibility too and that makes it ten thousand times better

These two literally have canon superpowers and everybody always treats that as normal even though they're the only nations like that. Some others practice magic, but that's not really a power, that's something different. And nobody ever questions WHY the twins have powers, why they of all nations have been singled out, and that's so strange to me

I'm surprised Alfred hasn't tried to fight crime as a literal superhero only to have his boss ground him for eternity for being so reckless and stupid lol
nicetwin123 chapter 8 . 1/15/2017
Yay, another chapter! I can't wait for your next one! :3
Random Guest chapter 7 . 1/9/2017
I'm getting a bit confused with the human names, could you say what countries they are next time? I knew the main characters with official human names, but others I don't know. Anyways, great story :)
Guest chapter 7 . 1/8/2017
You should do one where he's caught sleeping during a meeting with the president, some important politicians, or foreign dignitaries, and have him suddenly wake up slamming his hands on the table/desk accidentally cracking it.
Time Traverser chapter 7 . 1/8/2017
Ah, I missed this series.
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