Awww this was such a nice story! Of course I felt horrible when the others finally found Merlin and he was so withdrawn from them, but the story was really great!

I kind of like the concept of Uther actually caring about Merlin.
And calling Merlin his son.
And actually being Merlin's father.

It was quite marvelous, I must say.

Okay
So I absolutely love this story. Like really, you are awesome. I must say that the Liverpool dialect had me for a while until I noticed the explanation at the end.
Anyway, keep writing amazing stories and I wish you no writing blocks :) as it angers both author and his readers.
JSB

LOVED IT! A writing and poor Merlin! :3 Loved it 100%

Hehe nice story Though i personally think you let Arthur got away too light given the fact that you had Merlin almost got mugged and having a broken bone in the big city. Like having Morgana as the eldest sister and making Arthur personal slave to Merlin until his arm heal hehe just a thought i know its already finished. And i personally think the three guys who told Merlin to get on the train is actually the ones with the least liability they are jerks. in the end its Arthur's decision to go along with it. It would not have happened without his agreement and the silence of the rest of the group the least they could have done is own up to it. As you can see i was affected by the story being a younger sibling myself though i won't be as nice as Merlin if that happened to me. Hehe refer to aforementioned personal slave

I love this fic, its really cute. my only problem is with the 'liverpool language', i come from liverpool and i have heard about 2 of these phrases, they just sound silly and quite fake to me. Maybe for future reference try to avoid writing phonetically and using slang :)

I love the bit about protecting Arthur with the excuses-almost a modern-day equivalent of protecting him literally

They really are lucky butts. And technically of wasn't a complete lie...they just left out the bit about Liverpool...

Nice little end to a fantastic story :) I loved it !

Ahh, I wish I have a story making skill like Merlin. :') That would come in handy considering my wild nature sometimes...

It was a very nice story. I liked it a lot. Thank you very much. :D

Please update soon. I love the story

This is so cuteeee! I could practically imagine Merlin as an enthusiastic, carefree younger brother! ;/; Poor him though /hugs/ and poor Lance too... ;w;)

Lol, wait, what, is Liverpool's language a different language or something? :'3

I'd love more adventures like these where Merlin's Arthur's lil' bro! XD

Final installment plz! This was a really good chapter!

Awesome Chapter! I was glad to help.