This is what I want people to think fanfic is. This is what the stereotype should be. I love the way you've included loads of show references (like Fraser wearing weird glasses, and Pro Green the Krampus, and Christmas Town being where he meets Stephen), and yet it isn't cheesy in the sickly way: it's a kind of cheesy you want to revisit. Fluffy cheese, if that makes sense. Your characterisations are spot on, and I just love it altogether.
PS. With the paragraph describing the prison, you might want to change *ahem* 'bowel of sweets' *cough cough*; it kind of distracts from the story.

omg something has happened to your story, it does this
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I can't read it, and I really want too! But it's impossible!Please fix