Great job I hope you continue the story

ophis should be narutos

Why is Naruto talking like that?

i completely love this story please continue

more badass old man naruto fanfics should be made

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please update your story is very interesting and been a long time since I've meet Anything stimulating like this.

Ksigue

I'm really sad this hasn't been updated recently the story looks amazing

please grayfia and serafall confirmation

I would personally use uzukaze it means whirlwind and the name becomes maelstrom of the whirlwinds

By the way, your AN describing where you got Namaki from has the Uzu part of Uzumaki in bold instead of the maki part. No idea why this is even being brought up since it's such a minor error and easy for anyone to catch, but I guess I'm just OCD like that.

HURRY UP AND UPDATE THIS! IT'S BEEN TOO LONG#!

This is a rather interesting fic. So does the 666 end up being the jubi or something?

I like how Ravel ended up as his house guest. That was great.

It looks like you've got a nice set for Naruto's harem. Now you just have to have them introduced to each other. The fun will fill itself in from than on.

Um, are you adding the same folks to both harems or is it more an undecided thing?

So far, I like the idea of Serafall, Koneko, and Ravel being in on Naruto's group. Yumi, you've got the development so i'll wait and see.

I'd actually rather Akeno, Ophis and Grayfia fall under Issei's group.

Yes, I'd rather Naruto train the S&M leaning girls up for Issei's everlasting utter horror.

I can just see Akeno being taught all sorts of interesting things with seals and being told to try them out on Issei.

Naruto x Ravel