if percy and artemis keep this up the whole house will smell like dick.

Please continue it's an amazing storyline and I quite enjoy it

update this shit please, please, please

plz update this story is amazing like for real for real

Its Perseus

Yo wut da fick

Love the sex

Great chapter as always. Sorry I haven't reviewed recently. Just really busy with a lot of stuff.

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

Pretty sure a 'Black Lion' doesnt exist. Theres mountain lions and normal lions and a few others that exist in various parts of earth but not a black one.

Sloppy. In need of a great deal of work to say the least.

I mean, seriously. As is it is cringe-worthy. Angels (angles. lol). emotions, and ice are just.. I can't find the words to even begin to help you out.

The Lion was one of Hera's sacred animal by the way...

That doesn't even take into account how rushed and forced that whole scenario was. I'm going to have to give this a pass and wish you luck.

Great chapter as always. Is it possible for them to be longer? No sure if I have asked that already in a previous review on another chapter. I'm looking forward to the next update to the story. Best of luck in all your writing endeavors

good job

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.

May I Suggest getting Spell Check, Or Grammar Check, Or Even The Way You Arrange your words?
I know I am not much better but your story stutters and it misses words so I am always trying to guess what's happening next