worst story ever. naruto has the rinnegan? wtf moron

that was good keep the chapters coming

well this was nice and kinky can't beat that

Love your stories. Do you think you can add Shizune to this series, you don't have her in there.

Ryuzetsu you're the best.

AWESOME no one makes any of this pairing:'(

Just like the Galactic Empire in the second Star Wars film (original trilogy) DC316 has struck back with the righteous fury of a F-5 tornado. Not only was the fight scenes compelling but they were heart stopping and just as sweet as the lemon that shortly followed.

Before I wax poetic on the hot as hell love scene featuring my boy Naruto and Blood Prison co-star Ryuzetsu I must give my fellow Christian warrior a shout out for making the fight scene just as exciting as the ones featured in "The Last: Naruto the Movie." A lot of back and forth went into this one and although the outcome was never really in doubt it was nice to see the main protagonists get a run for their money before eventually triumphing.

As for that love scene; what can I say other than my boy DC316 took that bad boy downtown and slammed it home for the win. Every lick, every caress and every thrust was aptly described to such a degree that you think you was watching the Playboy Channel (not that I know what its like, NARF!).

The fact that DC316 used a girl that hasn't been used before makes this story all the more better. I remember Ryuzetsu from the "Blood Prison" film and I must admit seeing a new face in action makes things all the more interesting. Hopefully more authors will follow DC316 example and give girls not regularly featured a chance to shine in the spotlight.

A nice comeback for the child of light that has the mind of Jiraiya the Toad Sage. So in the immortal words of Mr. Spock: may you all live long and prosper.

I just have three things to say.

1: Exceedingly Good Job.

2: You sir, should be proud of your work. I am certain that if Jiraiya read any of this he would burst into tears and scream of how proud he is of it. He would probably also kneel before you and ask to be your apprentice.

3: Those two songs are good. I don't listen to a lot of Static-X, but I have a few likes from them. As for Papa Roach, well... If anyone has a beef with Papa Roach, then they have a mandatory meeting with my fist, as well as an army of other people. Good Choice.

Face Everything and Rise is also on a full album by Papa Roach labeled 'F.E.A.R.' I got it yesterday on iTunes.

Nice, dragon got dragged:)

Nice fight scene

Great story as always, though you should be careful there is group going round trying to ban your account for publishing your MA rated work, do you have any back-ups? If you do awesome I don't want your stories to leave, warn Raptorcloak too okay?

nice job

Friday March 6, 2015.

I just love your stories. It's sad that Ryūzetsu had to die in the movie.

great story, do you think you can do one where Naruto is paired with revy from black lagoon

Welcome back and what a knockout combination of kickass action and out of this world-lemon writing! I always love hearing Crash since its my favorite song of Static-X (R.I.P. Wayne Static) and it works on some many levels in a fighting scene.