Will you be finishing this soon?

BRILLIENT BRILLIENT ...LOVE IT

This is brilliant and yes, I do think you are writing Eli and the others really well and it is a thoughtful and original take on his character.
I am - I must say surprised and so happy that there are still people writing new LTM stories on here I was one of those who (guiltily) faded out but still come back here from time to time just to re read and see what's happening...I really hope you continue...well done you.

Eighth! Stab. To. Heart.

AAAHHHHHHHH! SO EMOTIONAL! PULLING HEART STRINGS! SO AMAZING

You have taken a semi-comic character and exposed so much depth and vulnerability, it's scary and unexpected. It's also wonderful and I'm looking forward to more.