Stupid homosexual propaganda go in hell.

Good fucking god. This is some of the most bullshit, angsty ridden shit I've read. OOh, and for those dipshits who tell reviewers to "chill", hop off the authors dick. I get you like sucking the author's shlong, and say bullshit things like "it's not your story" but shut your ass up. We read the fucking story, so we have an opinion of the fucking story.

You don't like the reviews, then get over yourself and stick a dick in your mouth to shut your shit up.

Other than the numerous spelling and grammatical errors, this has been quite entertaining so far.

Aside from some grammer errors, this was probably one of the best Naruto I've read in a long time.

Not to be a dick but there's a lot of misspellings I honestly don't care and you probably don't either I'm just saying

This is one of the worst stories I've ever come across.

GOD damn people chill out it isn't your story

geez anon chill

Your writing and side pairings are fucking obnoxious. From the way you write character interactions, you must be a little fucking shitstains in real life. Like one of those little dipshits that act edgy and immature as fuck Bet your whore mother regretted not aborting or swallowing you. The crusty cunt probably prays that you wind up dead in the dumps somewhere. Your life was an unfulfilling waste.

Naruto is a fucking asshole in this. In fact, work on your character interactions, developments, spelling, and grammar. All of those need a LOT of improvement. Your writing is piss-poor at way too many parts.

Besides a few spelling errors here and there, it's a great story, I hope you pick it up again soon

Awesome chapter hope you update

Dude get a beta this shit is hard to read

Update please

J'adore kiba sa réaction est bien voir un peu faible car il voir sa mère et sa sœur avac un mec qui a son âge .