Good story! Very well written.

Hmm. A very nice, detailed look into the backstory of the new Bionicle franchise. I especially like how the Mask is the true villain. It would be easy to assume that Makita is the big bad and he simply allowed himself to be corrupted. But I like the idea of a super powerful, sentient mask so powerful and evil that it's just waiting to be forged. Even willing to alter time to ensure that it will be. I also like the characterization. Makuta the wiser, more artistic brother who is willing to not only share the spotlight, but even take the secondary role so long as he gets his fair due and Ekimu the stronger and more paasionate sibling with heaps of raw talent that just needed help bringing it out. Overall a sad story with a hopeful ending and hoefully close to canon! Well done. Oh and my apologies for not signing in. On my cell phone during a slump at work, heh.