This is an incredible story. Very well written and the characters have great depth. I feel like I really know each of them. I'm waiting for the next alert, but take care of yourself first.

I can’t believe I’m only finding this story now. I’ve devoured it. If you’ve written or published anything else I need to find it. Thank you. This has been a wonderful escape for me. I know you will finish this story. It’s worth the wait.

Loved how Alice was so straightforward here.
Reminding Bella of her strength.
Geekmama

OMG! OMG! My heart hurts for her!
Looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds.
Thank you for sharing with us!
Geekmama

I really like this Carlisle. Doesn’t seem so passive a most.

Hope all is well with you and yours. And that the challenges have eased.
Laura Bee

I can’t stop weeping. So beautifully written. And so heartbreaking to read.
Thank you for sharing this.
Laura Bee

Hi there, reading this 2020, love it and would love to see it finished... just want to add that your Carlisle is so different, so much more authoritative and proactive. Nice job on Bella and Edward’s characters, you created different circumstances and adapted their personalities well to them.

Nice story, though with a sad tone. Also interesting to read something not written in first person. I hope there will be a happy resolution.

I like this story and appreciate your update, but I'm sad to see Bella and Edward speak so narrow-mindedly about Christianity regardless of whether they practice that faith. Millions of people consider the Bible God's words and hold it dear. It's understandable that Bella and Edward have different beliefs as that is their right, but kind of intolerant of her and Edward to talk about reserving sex for marriage as a "superstitious future obligation" and old-fashioned. This sounds judgemental. Superstitious has a negative connotation, as does old-fashioned. It's disappointing to hear when so many people are concerned about showing love and kindness towards people from all walks of life.

Bella's grief shutters me. It is overwhelming! But to her own astonishment she discovers she still wants to live. I hope that hope will find her way soon.

What a start! The atmosphere is so dense, Bella can hardly stand or exist. Your writing is very intense! Thank you so much for it!

Such a great story, thank you! Bella is perceptive and she gets suspicious about Edward and the Cullens. I guess she will put two and two together soon.

I cannot believe how much I love this fic.
This fic is 20 times more awesome than the original twilight in the sense that all the characters are far far more fleshed out and FEEL like real people with real places in the world. Bella is amazing. Even as a teenager. Jake is awesome and omfg the coven. What even. 10/10.
Can't wait to read more!

This is such a beautiful story. I'm sorry if I don't review more often. I'm an avid reader but a poor writer!
Thank you for sharing. I have reread so many times (with every update). These two are just so beautiful together.
Please continue no matter how long it takes!