I'm sitting here crying thinking how this is such a sweet and sad story and I can't help but wonder why in the world it only got 6 reviews and some of them were negative. Anyway, I really loved the part where Toby read what Sam wrote about everybody and Josh read Toby's part. Don't listen to the negative reviews, this story is great!

This is so sad
Hearthbroken
But also cute

You really need to brush up on your West Wing character info and personalities. Toby's father is not dead, Leo and the President would never break down in front of each other like that, it just doesn't fit the show.

That was a really sweet story. It was long, with a simple premise, but you really made it work. I liked when you had Sam come back to everybody to say goodbye. The only thing is, there's something mixed up with the chapters near the beginning. The third one is out of place.
I'm definitly going to read some of your other stuff now.

I've read this before and I remember enjoying it very much.

i don't exactly see them, (toby and josh) as crying and screaming...*sniff* toby's more the silently grieving type, but... i still like it. :-)

Ooooooooohh NO!

nicely done so far