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I can’t breathe from lack of vitamin c (c for chapter)

I know that was lame but my lameness also stems from lack of vitamin c

In other words

Please update

Really good story so far!

I love this story. in the last chapter, Sasori is so cruel with Gaara. I can't wait to see his reaction when he will see that the medical ninja sent is none other than the pink haired brat. I hope you will update soon. See you next chapter.

PSI'm french so if there are mistakes, sorry

Sasori seems to be an evil genius. I feel bad for Gaara. And now Sakura will be unleashed over there.

I'm so happy to find a notification of your updated chapter! my most favorite part is the interaction between Sasori and Gaara, very amusing.. and to think that Sasori become Kage, and still eager to quit from his position xD
love, love this story..!

This chapter had me cracking up! I love Sasori. I swear Gaara was about to unleash the bijuu on him, if he had to write that stuff one more time.

But now I am wondering, if Sasori did it on purpose to allow Sakura to become better and a candidate to come to Suna. He is a crafty fellow.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hello. I read this in one sitting and found that I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter! I hope there will be lots of SasoSaku interaction next chapter as well, and this story is a fresh idea in the SasoSaku part here. Please continue the good job, thank you!

Gaara's patience is amazing. I would have torn my hair off if I were him.

Loving the progress, Sasori is going to be in for a surprise hahaha

This is really good! Definitely like the storyline so far, can't wait for more!

I'm loving this story and I am loving the Sasosaku interaction. Please keep going with this story.

The last part was really cute but not in the cringey, "das cute, but there's no way that character will do that" kind of way. Sasori was still his creepy diva self despite all the fluffiness, so good job on that. Diverting from canon is definitely tricky as most fics tend to get ridiculous, but I think you're doing pretty good so far, so kudos for that as well!

Tsunade may have had this round with Sakura winning the fight, but it will be Sasori who will get the last laugh if he does get Sakura in the end. Just imagine a pissed off Tsunade feeling betrayed by her dear apprentice with a smug Sasori in the background, lol.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

AH THIS IS SOO GOOD
I LOVE IT
THE RELATIONSHIP
THE CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT
ALL
I can't wait to see where this will go!

Great concept! I like this Saori of yiurs. Very Tru to character. His shortness and old man grumpiness is perfect.

I really liked your story, I'll be waiting for the continuation.