Hey bird brain, when will you start your sequel to "Leo's Tail"?

Did you mean to say Edmund is blond in the ninth paragraph (as opposed to "dark" in the first)? I really really hope so, because it made me squeal out loud in delight. As did the proper Narnian green instead of red.

I've never tried reading Narnia fanfiction, but I really liked this. I've always thought that since Lucy and Peter were close to each other, the same would be said for Susan and Edmund. I enjoyed it a lot!