I thought it was beautiful in its own deep and somewhat dark way. v

My god this is just too sad. This is bringing me to tears..

Can someone get the dust out of my eyes... please..

Great story, the time I'm reading this was the same time I'm listening an emotional song. It made me emotional which really rare for me to do.

You have ripped out my heart with your writing. Part of me wants to tell you how good it is but the other part of me is like nnnooooooooo how could you do this to me!

*sobbing* jdaidhsiafjpoejlancpiajdajlskdfjasf That was beautifully sad~! Ohmygosh, whyyyyy? Why do I do this to myself?! It was magnificent! *sobs some more* It was amazing! Thank you! I'm going to go cry in the corner!

- Kira

This Is Amazing

How sad and dull.

I saw a mistake... It was in the disclaimer: I do not One Piece. Great story btw

I can't find the words to express what I have on my mind.. Luffy giving up and a month later both his brothers wake up..?
I was crying starting from the part where Luffy went to get the rope and couldn't stop till the end..
I hope that bastard is dead. I hope he bled out to death.
Thank you for sharing.

The angst was strong in this one ;_; Good job tho! :D

*collapses on ground* Right in the fucking kokoro. Ugh God it hurts. This was entirely too depressing. I'm just going to read a happy story and try to stop crying.

So, after luffy died ace and sabo woke up? Thats really fucked up, i mean, thats just...awww T-T

Sad but beautifully written and beautifully developed story. Thank you so much for writing it.

TT_TT what