can someone adopt this amazing story

I haven't read the old fic, (before reupload) so i can't tell whats the different between the two, but this one is good and very interesting, no grammar mistake that i can find. Good job making this.

PS
i hope you change your mind about not talking about this anymore and continue to update, i am sure more fans will love this. We have less Tsukihime Xover fic, and we need more author like you. ;)

That...that was quite nice actually.

Wasn't that longer with a part where Kyon "looks" at Haruhi and sees no lines (at the beginning at least) and realises she is unkillable/a god (and later when sees lines on her too that he can kill even "a god") ?
Hmmm, probably some other fic...

Anyway glad to see it (re)uploaded.

Oh come on please don't tell me this is only a oneshot!? I wished it wasn't so, but even then thanks for sharing this with us. ...Perhaps you'd be so kind as to turn this into a series of oneshots with the hijinks "Kyon" and Asakura get up to? I was seriously not expecting that development, kudos!

Good, please continue.

Be proud of this. It's actually pretty well done! Hope you don't mind, but I'll be watching this just in case you decide to continue it.