| Reviews for Death Revelation |
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Pein's number 1 Girl chapter 3 . 1/26 I love it so much! 20/10 would read again |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/13/2018 Wow! This is extremely well written, and stays true to the characters from both series...even if it made me cry. |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/9/2018 As soon as it said ‘No. That wasn't true. Martin and Luella...’ I started sobbing, and I haven’t stopped since then. And when Chi thought they should meet in the next life I cried more and thought ‘they deserve it again and again, and after that, they deserve to and so does Gene...’ and it makes me cry when I think about Gene too. I hope there is one wrote about Gene that is like this. I wish Oliver would have cried though once he thought about his parents. I still have yet to find a fanfic where he cries. And when I do. I won’t stop crying for like ever. XD |
Glarie chapter 3 . 8/14/2017 Lovely crossover :). The fact it took them till (after) death to finally face their feelings head on, and then to know what little time they had left with each other ... ugh ;_; why you gotta pull all my heart strings like this?! Then the realization that Naru's parents lost both sons... just BURY me already skdhfskdjfhdsf. On a happier note, your fanfic introduced me to Death Parade so thanks for that :o. |
Scy B. Lad chapter 3 . 8/7/2017 This story is down right 100% the best fanfiction I've ever read! |
Scy B. Lad chapter 3 . 8/7/2017 This story is down right 100% the best fanfiction I've ever read! |
Knight52323 chapter 3 . 3/24/2017 crap now I'm crying. |
Ruby Cider chapter 3 . 3/6/2017 You did an incredible job with this! I knew I couldn't be the only one who though Death Parade and Ghost Hunt would make a good crossover ;) But honestly, you wrote this so well. You had me in tears from beginning to end. You captured the characters so well! |
Little-bad-Angel chapter 3 . 1/27/2017 thanks for making me cry |
Ms. J chapter 3 . 11/19/2016 Jesus, this story was cute and emotional. Thanks for the tears! |
soulsborne123 chapter 3 . 11/1/2016 Sigh. I read this yesterday and it's still stuck in my mind. I just feel so depressed! I don't like reading depressing stuff, and even though I knew where this was headed since I know about Death Parade (that show was too good), I had to keep reading. It ended so bittersweet TT*TT Then in my head I just think they got reincarnated into their AU universe and Naru became the Ghost of Gifford Library . heh. |
Lady Kimi chapter 3 . 7/11/2016 You officially killed me (no pun intended). I m bawling my eyes out to the point where I feel like I'm dying. It was so well written and built until the last sentence. You have great talent for sure. |
Kiara.Queen.of.Kaos chapter 3 . 1/10/2016 I'm crying This story is amazing. |
archangelBBQ chapter 3 . 12/22/2015 You know just as I clicked for this next chapter I put it all together ("Death Revelation" and all..) and figured they must have already died. (I should also say I don't know Death Parade (but now I wish I did.)) But I love the way you've structured this story, the gradual build-up, so that if you -don't- know Death Parade you don't realize until Mai and Naru realize themselves at the beginning of this chapter. This ending, this whole story... oh my goodness, my heart just aches. Naru sacrificing himself for Mai both times is just so heartbreaking. And then the realization, the finality of death ... (aughghhgh poor Lin-san to find these two like that, not to mention poor Martin and Luella) and the immense guilt of knowing he was the reason Mai died. Just. JUST. (ach, my poor heart.) And the way they have to part. So much sadness. But it's really beautiful too. Parting is such sweet, sweet sorrow. And knowing they'll meet again. Really lovely. Thank you for sharing this! I can't wait to read your other Ghost Hunt story too, it's been on my list (for ages, sorry) and I'm happy to finally get a chance to sit down and read it :) |
archangelBBQ chapter 2 . 12/22/2015 Gah this chapter is so intense! The tension between them is just perfect (and I am crying a little inside thinking about Naru TT_TT) Mai is just perfectly stubborn and obstinate and Naru so strong-willed. I'm afraid for what the vision is going to be. I don't want either of them to die, but I'm not sure they're allowed to get out of this one.. |