I loved this! Good job! *Thumbs up*

This was a nice story, thank you!

The story flowed really well and came together nicely. The emotions you wrote were strong and really helped to set the atmosphere for the story. They also made sure the story was interesting and gripping, as well as showing the deep relationship between the characters.

There were a few minor grammar issues throughout, and the use of epithets made it a little weak at points, but these are general issues that can be easily sorted out. They didn’t detract from the overall story though.

Overall, this was a good story and highlighted how strong their bonds are.

Best wishes!

Yo omg this is really good! (not to mention your language is so smooth) Awesome job bruh! You should totally write more! :)
Banzai!

This is great! Sorry I can't give you more than that, I'm terrible with words, but it is good! I really liked it and you kept the characters in character very nicely. Thanks for sharing your writing!

I really like how you wrote this story, especially how Sanji, Luffy, and Zoro act around each other. I really like how you have Luffy knows kinda what he feels for Zoro but, at the same time, knows that he still needs more time to figure everything out. And I love how the Sanji POV parts shows how he really does care for his crew and really wanted Zoro to be okay, not even really for himself though but because he knew it would hurt Luffy. I can't wait to read more for this series if you decide to do more OP. Thanx so much, bye!