hohhoohoo~ holy what?!

Great job with this chapter nicely done

Random ass memory decided to remind me of s post I meant to make after already moving on.

When Karin spoke to Kushina she says I've or I'll always be watching over you and then immediately asks her what her life has been like.

My brain stuttered on those 2 sentences being side by side.

Since he said that in front if Onoki I'm guessing her being the Jinchuruuki is now known by the Kage other than Mei?

Wish there was more interactions in the group. Not much dialogue going on.

Anyone else think that Tayuya would actually be quite attracted to what this version of Naruto should be like?

Seems like shes just there to be there though and spends her time alone when not training with others or watching the girls.

1) He knew he could have handled the both of them but he didn't feel like dealing with Jiraiya, who he felt was on the way, and possibly blowing his cover since if Jiraiya learnt of him being in town it would only complicate things.

um.. couldn't they take out their irritation by telling Jaraiya hes there before leaving ti get back at him anyway?

2) I'm assuming the end comments about dodging bullets are about Naruto fighting with Pandora. I have to disagree that only Minato can. Yiu can make the argument about bullet speed yes. You also have to take into account them already moving at high speed. As well as watching for muscle movement like a trained fighter would. Especially ninja with enhanced senses whi could see the hand tense and attempts to aim the arm to move before the bullet is even shot.

What about Shunshin and Kawarimi?

When dealing with ranged opponents like that as long as it's not an ambush or snipe they know to throw them off with ranged jutsu and weapon barrages as well to screw with aim.

If it's a clone I'd feel sorry for the clone. More importantly she'd have to disperse it over time or else when it does it'll screw her royally recieving its memories after being around for too long.

How did she help him in the end if the headbutt she did right before he arrived shouldve been what woke him up? She get through to him while he slept?

Also where the hell was Jaraiya? I thought it said he was with Minato when grabbed. Also strange he lost his arm to them, more so if Jaraiya was there.

Guess neither he nor Karin care about Hinata anymore or the author simply forgot about their relationship and the care he had for her as well.

Also nothing on the Ichirakus as well.

He didnt care about the other 2 Hyuugas? I thought he had a good opinion of his sisters best friend Hinata. Now he doesnt care in the slightest?

1) I'm confused that Minato would have the gall to make the comment about Naruto possibly attacking king the other kage when 3 of them have been pressuring him to remove the bounty and that they didnt call him on his bullshit threat.

2) Just occured to me that he was wondering around grown up during the uchiha massacre. Though it seems nothing changed anyway.

3) I wonder if he has a relationship with the Ichirakus from before he was sealed.

Big let down that he didnt end up with Mei. I don't understand why it would be a sibling thing.

Damn shame.

Mei if canon has any hold on this point should be 23 at this time. So shes not THAT much older than him. Though theres already a bunch of chapters out so ill just have to see how it went.

Need to point out that if none of them know where he is the delivery hawk shouldnt know where to deliver the message.

Unless it's something like sending it to a group of personal hawks that retrieve any message sent to them by another hawk at their location and then come over to him.

Wonder if he met any others like Fu, Natsuhi and so on.

I forgot to post this last chapter:

Who are you picking up?" Kurotsuchi asked confused who else he would bring here.

"Karin and my Aunt Tsunade, when I called her she said she wanted to help raise Karin and look after me for whatever reason" he said as the black haired girl frowned and Karin smiled.

Shizune and my Aunt Tsunade,

Also boo that Tsunade doesnt seem like she'll eventually be with him, nor Shizune. It's been too long but I think in canon hes triggered her memories of not just Nawaki but also Dan as he got older. Oh well.

Ch.03 comment:

Rather than some Uzumaki blood the Senju should also age slower just maybe not to the degree of an Uzumaki. Inheriting the body as the Uchiha inherited the eye.

Unfortunately she screws her advantage to hell and back using her special creation rebirth seal too much during the war which eats at her life force and ages her faster.