Arthur is certainly one sick basterd; definitely true to medieval age behaviour.

Well done. Excellent wrap up of the story. I especially like how you stated what the legends would say about how they met, while the truth was forgotten.

So out of character. It's a great story on its own but you just slapped the Merlin characters' faces on your own original characters. I don't feel like I'm reading a Merlin fic at all.

Sister and brother are the same conquering abusers.

Interesting how you crossed the ending with Harry Potter and Once Upon a Time.
Ooc but good story.

Sorry I can't still accept the fact that Arthur did all those horrible things and yet Merlin still fell in love with him. He ruined Merlin's life! Merlin didn't even think much about what Arthur did just to get him when he should've! I would've like it more if he has a more reasonable reason (yes stupidly redundant) why he fell in love with Arthur I know I have many complaints and all but I did enjoy your story I hope that you'll keep on improving in your future stories. LoveLove

Arthur is a vile bastard

This as a really great story I just don't feel that the ending was happy. Merlin is a victim of Stockholm Syndrome and fell in love with his captor. I thought that Arthur would die in some way and that Merlin would end up with Gwaine. Even though I don't like that ending I still love the story. Keep on writing.

Hysterically funny badfic...

I have to say, Arthur is a bastard whom I would kill in this story cos he is forcing Merlin.

I absolutely hate Arthur in this story he completely ruined Merlins life and killed his father, filthy stinking bastard I would call him and uther

oh shit

The way you described merlin made me think of snow white!

I'd love a sequel

I love these kind of story's