I was kinda worried with that thing with pitch but it resolved itself so it's all goodgreat story

*Holding a tissue up to my aggressively bleeding nose.* You are an amazing writer. I kinda want to see you write their anniversary...

This was really cute and the ending...wow.

This is one of my new favorites! It's soo cute, and I live how you portray the characters. It's perfect! o

You have got to be kidding me. When I read this I was like "Wow this person must've written so many fanfictions/stories... They're so talented and good with words!" And I get to the bottom... And see... this is your first... fanfiction... I just- my god.

Okay, the whole story was just so sweet and fluffy and AAWWWW and DAYUM! Everything was so perfect!

The lemon? Had me wide-eyed and breathing heavily. And my face felt hot. I literally had to cover my mouth with both my hands and set the A/C to full blast. *fans self vigorously* STILL HOT HERE. THIS IS OFFICIALLY MY MOST FAVOURITE SMUT STORY SO FAR!

This is too hot... But when Hiccup mumbled, "And whose heart?" and Jack whispered, "Yours." I was a mess. AND DID I MENTION THIS IS HOT AS FUCK? COZ IT IS! *faints with a nosebleed*

please, write about their one year anniversary. This was amazing and extremely well written for your first one.

God, the ending was cute.

I remember when I went to California. Pretty mellow in San Francisco and Walnut Creek, but really messed up down south. But a really well-written, nice job!

Toothless is just EVIL.

Awwwww, Jack and Hiccup are so cute!

So awesome :-) loving that sex scene :-)

Are you kidding me
Are you mother ducking kidding me right now.
I do NOT believe this is your first fanfic.
I CALL SHENANIGANS.
This is too perfect and well put together xD
I WANT MORRREEEE
You have talent! I love this great job! C:

I really love this story its so sweet and incredible! I can't wait to read more and I hope that this does get finished and written. You are truly talented.