Reviews for For Valentine's Day
StarWarsOnly chapter 1 . 4/3/2015
I finally got to reading your Valentine's Day story. It is really sweet and I hope that Fred's date goes well. I am really curious about what happened on his date and Lucille and Henry's date. Jacob and Jenny were adorable handing out of the Valentine candy and cards. At the end, when Marty said we should seal it with a kiss was funny when he was actually taking about the kiss candy. The kiss was great at the end of the scene, I really think they are the perfect couple like soul mates. I wonder what would have happened if Marty never returned, who would date Maggie? Would she be left alone? She would have probably found someone, maybe a relative to Marty.
kevin the bird chapter 1 . 3/3/2015
AYE, THIS IS THE CUTEST FIC I'VE READ IN THE LONGEST TIME. this fic made me so happy.

lJASLKDFJALKSJ i love the idea of marty watching watching jacob with maggie and jenny! and i love that marty was the first one to arrive. and MARTY'S ENTRANCE WITH GIVING LUCILLE A COMPLIMENT WAS ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE AND I LOVED IT.

and the description of lucille's jewelry and dress was absolutely amazing and i loved her outfit because it's totally something i could see her seeing it! and i love when lucille asks where maggie and jenny are because i could also see her asking where they were and the idea of jenny going with maggie to go on errands was absolutely adorable.

and i love the whole conversation about store bought valentine cards was perfect anD WHEN MARTY SMILED APOLOGETICALLY AND LUCILLE SMILING BACK WAS ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE AND I COULD TOTALLY SEE IT HAPPENING AS WELL.

AND THEN WHEN MAGGIE AND JENNY COME IN AND LUCILLE OPENS THE DOOR FOR THEM ALDKFJALSKDJF. and don't even get me started on the fact that jenny gave everyone a cupcake and thE EXCHANGING OF VALENTINE'S CARDS BETWEEN JACOB AND JENNY. aldkjfALSDKJF it was absolutely adorable and i loved it!

i loved the whole exchange between lucille and maggie about maggie being anti-valentine because it's adorable and totally something i could see happening! my favorite part was when lucille mentioned that maggie never had a date on valentine's day and it was perfect.

anD THEN HENRY'S ENTRANCE WITH FRED. my favorite part was: "Lu," a deep voice was heard calling, "Fred's here." aYE, THOUGH. that was so perfect and i loved it because it's totally true!

I LOVED THAT EVERYONE'S SURPRISED ABOUT FRED BEING ALL DRESSED UP! they totally need to get matt craven in clothes other then his sheriff's outfit!

DOOD, THE WHOLE EXCHANGING OF HENRY'S GIFT WAS PERFECT. I LOVED HOW HENRY ASKED JACOB ABOUT HIS SURPRISE, I LOVE HOW EVERYONE WANTED TO SEE IT AND I LOVED LOVED LUCILLE'S REACTION! when she cupped henry's face it was totaLLY PERFECT. I LOVED THE DESCRIPTION OF HIS FACIAL HAIR.

AND DON'T GET ME STARTED ABOUT THE REST OF THE FIC! I AM SO GLAD YOU WROTE THEM BABYSITTING THE ENTIRE THING.

anD THE KISS AT THE END? ASDJFAKSDJFKLSAFJDLKASDJFLKASDJFAS SO GLAD YOU WROTE THAT BECAUSE IT WAS TOTALLY PERFECT AND I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT. SO CUTE!
TvFanaticDayDreamer chapter 1 . 3/3/2015
Aww how adorable! Haha I love how the family messed with Henry when he gave Lu her gift. Glad he didn't seem embarrassed just annoyed lol. I think the scene where Jacob made the cards was cute. I like how lucille felt guilty for not telling him about buying cards. Loved it
Marla's Lost chapter 1 . 3/3/2015
Writing with my phone so excuse the shortness. I just loved this - the corny valentines quotes "awesome possum" and they were awesomely sweet at the same time.

You touched on THE KISS and how Maggie and Marty never talked about it. Loved the whole thing and it had me smiling like crazy (cuz you know how I like this pairing.

Lucille's party outfit sounded so glad and I was glad that you had Henry acknowledge it. His gift was perfect even if the idea of giving it to his wife can little early made him grumpy.

Loved Fred and how he was kinda asking permission to go on the date. Very sweet Prissy, I think that this was my favorite of yours.

Great job!

Marla
IaraLupin chapter 1 . 3/2/2015
I love it! I really enjoyed reading this.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
Love this story so mucH. It was so great and ive missed the show heaps. Love the lucille and henry moments so so adorable. Henry is so amazing with Jacob and i loved their scenes so much. Pls write some more soon! These stories make my week!
MochiMaster chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
Wow, this was wonderful and so worth the wait! Again you're stories are so great because it's like watching an episode as I read, great job as always. I can't wait to see what you write next!
HPfangirl13 chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
That was a great little story! Thanks!