| Reviews for Of Red Petals and Black Feathers |
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  Horny Horned Rat chapter 7 . 7/15 I am liking this tale so far, but I am a bit off put. Ruby seems to be a mary sue at times. I get the reasoning what with her being merged with Fiddlesticks, but how she solo solves every problem by herself is off putting to me due to it seeming like a mary sue. But I need to give credit where credit is due. I love how Ruby's abillity makes it hard for her to socialize and it actually gives her problems. I love how you addressed said problems. I also love how Ruby is being fleshed out more as a character and is developing. I am also happy with Ruby's new direction. Instead of a hyper happy girl, you have a Kudere. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/7 Fiddle and pro are a good team comp for aoe Ult wombo Combos haha |
 H20 Ferrum Dominus chapter 12 . 7/3 Glad to see you return to this mate! Thanks for the update, and keep up the good work! I cannot wait for the next one! |
| goldfencer chapter 12 . 7/1 ...Goddammit, I just thought of a really stupid character blend. "It's not Raven, it's Raaaaaaaven." And somehow combing Raven Branwen with the League's biggest narcissist makes her a better human being. It'd be pretty hard to make her worse. |
| H20 Ferrum Dominus chapter 3 . 7/1 Well at least our blond dork of a leader here is competent at least. With League of Legends being prominent in this story, I was kinda expecting Jaune to get Garen's greatsword or something like that. He seems like the white knight type sort of person based on cannon. |
| H20 Ferrum Dominus chapter 1 . 7/1 I'm quite disappointed in myself that I only discovered this now. I Favorited this a long time ago, but I kinda forgot about it, so better late than never I guess! Thanks for the prologue, and keep up the good work! |
| Orchamus chapter 12 . 7/1 Well that makes a great deal of sense, though the dream at the beginning just raises more questions. Thanks for the chapter! |
| Redpodjellybeans chapter 12 . 6/30 Viktor v YOO I WAS SOO PUMPED WHEN I GOT A NOTIFICATION OF THIS! I'm wondering how uh, spooky Ruby can get now that the new Fiddlesticks personality is there(tbh I don't know it's new personality too, just that it does what it does and spooks people.) Baby Ruby has recovered! Ornn is a good boi, very fluffy, very sad too :( |
| Kragh50 chapter 12 . 6/30 Thanks for the chapter! |
| Aurelius Rivensbane chapter 12 . 6/30 Honestly, the doctor gives off a massive Yorick vibe, would be cool if that were the case |
| Ninja6345 chapter 12 . 6/30 Very interesting. I like it. Looking forward to seeing what happens next, especially in regards to that 'lost voice'. |
| KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 12 . 6/30 Great chapter. Your stories are really good. |
| DRMAK chapter 12 . 6/30 Interesting. |
| avidreaded chapter 12 . 6/30 How the hell was that 5k words? That felt way faster than 5k. Sill a good chapter of course but I started reading and next thing I know I'm done. Felt like I'd barely settled in to read. |
| The Deck Master chapter 12 . 6/30 Man when Noct shows up its gonna be crazy if that was how we met another Demon, Eve is gonna be interesting too for... PLOT reasons. and her great BACKstory... I mean her boobs and ass for those dense people reading this. Great chapter as always cant wait for the next one. |
