Ah. Wasn't sure he'd actually kill her till the end, there. Perfect way to wrap it up

Wow, kind of like picking your poison. L is exhibiting some disturbing Yandere traits here... which probably isn’t all too surprising considering he’s one of those ‘great genius bored with the world’ type. Those kind have the potential to get really obsessed when they find an object of interest and never let go. *sweats nervously*

Interesting story, though :P I like Anna already. Gonna check out the bigger original story.

Wow it was good! :) & bitter-sweet.

L's pride...it's always his pride that got him in the end. But not just that, the Task Force doubting him and his judgement as well.

Then again, he doubted Anna's judgement. A full pitying sad circle.

I LOVED IT! YOU WRITE VERY WELL! IM GOING TO READ ALL THE OTHER SHOTS AS WELL~~!

I seriously just want to kick L's ass over and over, reading this... Jesus, poor Anna. Who knew Light would be somehow less of a crazy asshole room-mate than L?!

... I really like this Fic. The idea of her posing as the maid is weird and ridiculous and I would have loved to have read about everyone’s initial reactions. This would have been an awesome mirror Fic to GotM! Thank you for writing it!

I don't know if it was intended or simple a coincidence, but I was reminded of a poem I read once when I was younger as I re-read this. It took me a bit to find it again after all this time. The poem is called "Last Sunset" by Jasio. You can find it here if you don't wanna type the name and author into the search bar: /poem/1240091-Last-Sunset-by-Jasio

I'm crying and I don't fully understand why. Probably because this was beautiful.

this is amazing. fuvk my dude/dudette/non-binary author you got the character of L down to a tee. I LOVE YOU AND ANNA AND EVERY SINGLE CHARACTERIZATION IN ALL OF YOUR FICS

That sunset metaphor was deep, dude. Like, the end. Of the day, of life altogether.

Anna isn't dead... right? Loved it. Idiot L, dying in the end. That broke my heart. Seriously, I love Deathnote but I'm not a fan of any of the characters- but here, I suppose I couldn't help but soften towards L in the end. Knowing that you lost, that you've been checkmated, that you cant lrevent your own death despite knowing- tough. If Anna did survive, I'd love how L would react to that. Oh, and making her a maid with that outfit was just cruel. I totally loved this.

And you only made me ship the whole Light/Anna/L pairing even more so! Mou! This is killing me!

It would have been awesome if she s6rvived, if only because her face was not her real face, but this ending was so very awesome too. To get killled because L's stubborness... I would have punched L, not huged him :)

Amazing ! ;)

An intriguing foil to the main fic. Thank you for the story; I enjoyed it quite a bit.