:) nice

Great story, I really liked it. As you might know, most fan fictions represent AUs, since the whole point of writing one is deriving your own story from the show. I didn't feel that in this story, since the characters were true to the anime and light novel, which made me see this as a possible future instead, which I really enjoyed. Great work, and keep it up.
Cheers.

i want longer chap and more yukino x hachi..
encore.. encore.. encore..
thanks XD

i hope yukinoxhiki fan fiction please...

actually, there's a huge lack of any fic that is not hiikki yukino, but yeah. kawasaki fic would be nice
o-or p-perhaps an iroha one?

I quite like the story but try to split the paragraphs. For example, "Well actually Hitomi! I'm home early cause I..." you should've put another line break.