| Reviews for Voice of the Dragonborn, a Song of Ice and Fire |
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Eternalking500 chapter 2 . 9/8/2018 Please update soon, this has the makings of a awesome and unique elder scrolls song of fire and ice crossover fanfic. It would be cool though if he was a warrior mage, I also think that it would be awesome if he uses magic from elder scrolls online, along with skyrim and it's DLC. It would be cool also if he finds word walls in Westeros and Essos that were put there by akatosh and kyne. It would also be cool if he is a spell crafter. Also was that dream he had a vision of the possible future, it would be cool if it was, I've never seen any one do that before. |
ocstek chapter 2 . 10/24/2016 Your story isreally good so far. I just jave one small improvement proposal: you could say that dany has the blood of a dragon, but not the soul. Like that you would still explain the valyrians familiarity to the dragons, and also follow the TES lore that the dovahkiin is the last dragonborn. Its just a small thing though. Apart from that, your story is great so far and im looking forward to read the next chapter :) ! |
Amouren chapter 2 . 12/28/2015 continue plese |
mpowers045 chapter 2 . 11/20/2015 Continue |
Serithus chapter 2 . 6/24/2015 Can't wait to see where this vision will take us |
Zrocker119 chapter 2 . 6/15/2015 This...is...AWESOME! You've got a good thing going on. Please update soon. |
Esmas138 chapter 2 . 5/22/2015 Great story can't wait to where you go with it |
The Towers chapter 2 . 3/9/2015 Bravo, I say, you know your Elder Scrolls creation lore very well, indeed, this is a great fantastic merging of these two worlds. |
rjcolo chapter 2 . 3/8/2015 Awwww man, I REALLY want to know who that creepy voice belongs to, but you don't have to reveal any spoilers. But would you mind if I PM'd you my bold prediction because I have a feeling it will be spoilerific. In any case, this is a fantastic start and I'm excited to see what you do with it! :) |
FallenStar39 chapter 2 . 3/8/2015 Very well done, I can't wait to see what changes have happened to skyrim/tamriel because of the peace (also how that happened?). Are we suppose to know what the giant skeletal hand/kalpa are? or is that something you made up? (either way, it sounds very interesting. |
jeffs87 chapter 2 . 3/7/2015 Awesome start. One thing I would advise is to quickly towards GoT. Don't have more thAn three skyrim chapters. |
Accursius chapter 2 . 3/7/2015 A well written and paced chapter! That Ulfgar received a dream prophecy out of nowhere? shoving every incident in GoT was a bit much for me as it takes away a lot of the suspension away and gives him nearly more knowledge than the people living there. Though I guess he could still make false assumptions about the civil war and fail to find Daenarys. Looking forward to future updates and especially to read how he will reach the GoT lands. |
DoctorEagle chapter 2 . 3/6/2015 DANG! This was an intense chapter! I think this is a great start to the story and I love how you're incorporating the two worlds together. Can't wait to see what you do next! |
Mashot Tito chapter 1 . 3/3/2015 Well, that was a nice little prolog. Informitive and artistic. Nice touch with the creation of the SOIAF dragons. Now I must ask, Who will be the dragonborn if there is one? Will you make Danny the Dragonborn or will it be someone else. An other question I have is, How much of the Elder Scrolls world will be in this story? Will there be Magic, Vampires, Werebeasts, and so on? Any way, this seems like a nice story to follow. |
Accursius chapter 1 . 3/1/2015 Nice! Please dont abondon your story as did most of the few others that attempted to write a crossover connecting Daenerys to the Dragonborn, even though they had such potential. I hope you will find a good balance between Ulfgar and the GoT chars. Another difference between the dragons is that GoT dragons can grow far bigger than TES dragons, at least after several centuries. - the biggest was said to have swallowed a mammoth whole. Another possible point of connection between the verses could be the White Walkers aka Draugr. Judging by the geography Westeros could be connected to Atmora and the reason why Atmora froze over could be the same magical reason as to why Westeros always suffers from such long winters. I dont know if you already have experience writing elsewhere, but it was well written, especially for your first story. Congrats! |