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   techno02 chapter 8 . 2/7/2017 nice job! |
| techno02 chapter 3 . 2/6/2017 oh damn |
| Draclepire chapter 8 . 3/16/2015 Super! It really was a nice touching story from you. Well i think this may be the last chapter from you i think and i hope to see more from you friend. |
| RIO2Lover100 chapter 7 . 3/15/2015 Glad the plan worked |
| Draclepire chapter 6 . 3/11/2015 It's just keep getting better and better. |
| RIO2Lover100 chapter 6 . 3/11/2015 Hope the plan works |
| Draclepire chapter 5 . 3/8/2015 Keep continuing! |
| gobulldog chapter 1 . 3/8/2015 good story |
| RIO2Lover100 chapter 5 . 3/8/2015 Let's hope their plan works |
| RIO2Lover100 chapter 4 . 3/5/2015 oh dear, hope hey get back together soon |
| Draclepire chapter 4 . 3/4/2015 It's starting to get more interesting. I would like to see what happen next |
| Draclepire chapter 1 . 3/4/2015 have to admit, you also have put some of the emotions in your story that i can imagine. Well without further do, you have improved. Your writing, as i said, has also improved a lot. I'm also the same as you. I had a bad beginning then, we become better. Sorry i have to write the review in this chapter. I already write one in the third. |
| Draclepire chapter 3 . 3/2/2015 Wow. Nice tension. I like to read more of this. Probably, better if you make your chapters longer. XD |
| RIO2Lover100 chapter 3 . 3/2/2015 Uh oh, things aren't going to go well if pearl is their |
| Draclepire chapter 2 . 3/2/2015 Well, i like this story. You put a new type of genre which is hurt and comfort. THey are my second best type of genre. I hope to see more from this story. P.S. Isn't it awkward if a yellow macaw and a blue macaw is together? Isn't that cross breeding? But if it comes from your imagination, then i will accept it. 10/10 :) |
