| Reviews for Naruto: Path of the Dragon Shinobi (Rewrite) |
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Zero fullbustier chapter 14 . 6/22 Daichi should join naruto in hayabusa village and becomes his bestfriend maybe kushina adopts him |
mako234 chapter 25 . 4/18 More Please! |
BeTricks871 chapter 4 . 2/23 Kushina that jutsu is the edo tensei. Kushina ese jutsu es el edo tensei. |
Kingkong101 chapter 15 . 2/21 You paired naruto with the useless flat bitch WTF? |
AJGuardian chapter 7 . 2/6 I'd like to point out that the grammar quality went down a few degrees |
Kingkong101 chapter 25 . 11/7/2019 Horrible pairing |
demzerff1 chapter 4 . 8/12/2019 I feel like tsuki is a wasted opportunity for a marriage with gaara. Also I rather hate that kushina moved on so quick since it seems out of character. Her greatest attribute has always been her tough heart but even she needs more time. For six years she lived without her husband and son having to mourn them while also raising a daughter and leading a village. That is all super heavy and she likely never got an opportunity to truly just mourn her loss before naruto is brought back but by then she not has to focus even more on two children and managing who is around naruto given his importance to the village and her specifically where as tsuki was already in a somewhat self reliant state. After that she needs to manage her village well in preparation for cutting ties to konoha and furthering the training of her children. Up to this point she still has never had a chance to just take time off for some months to finally mourn and let herself go. Believe me I had to hold in my sadness when my brother and grandfather died because things were hectic but when I finally had time I just had to cry. Even with that in the end this should have been the chapter where she could finally take time off because her children are so mature now and she has great family friends to help out. Instead she moves on so easily and it leaves a bitter taste in the mouth like this is clearly not kushina. Regardless I will simply brush over any mention of her relationship and continue onwards. |
Ryusui Asakura chapter 12 . 3/8/2019 I forgot to ask but when the whole deal of well guns does come to play how does that go with the land of dragons having samurai cause I was going to comment on not having guns but anyway if you do then sengoku style Japanese land of dragons having samurai is forfeit cause it makes no sense and I know you like call of duty but after reading this again like I said it's best for Japan to be like normal naruto countries and have guns like old sengoku style guns and large armies and then add more countries that would be fan~made |
Ryusui Asakura chapter 12 . 3/8/2019 I forgot to ask but when the whole deal of well guns does come to play how does that go with the land of dragons having samurai cause I was going to comment on not having guns but anyway if you do then sengoku style Japanese land of dragons having samurai is forfeit cause it makes no sense and I know you like call of duty but after reading this again like I said it's best for Japan to be like normal naruto countries and have guns like old sengoku style guns and large armies and then add more countries that would be fan~made |
Darth revan1998 chapter 20 . 1/26/2019 Good chapter can't wait for the next update |
Ryusui Asakura chapter 17 . 1/24/2019 another idea is akatsuki members have spider nin as well as other kinds of elite ninja that the Dragon ninja can match like I said other shinobi clans existed since I watched basilisk I think I spelled that anime name right... |
Ryusui Asakura chapter 13 . 1/23/2019 I am waiting for as I'm reading this for the 100th time, is for naruto to battle itachi and the rest as well as the two year timeskip etc and maybe a separate connected Dragon village that could well replace konoha maybe like a twist to the storyline all together and I'm using the app offline sooo if anyone replies to this well I won't be able to respond... |
Ryusui Asakura chapter 14 . 1/23/2019 we can make other village specifically more non elemental villages though pm me through the app if you're active. |
Ryusui Asakura chapter 25 . 1/21/2019 good chapter when is the next One? and maybe sasuke can join the black spider ninja When is the next chapter? |
Ryusui Asakura chapter 11 . 1/21/2019 I would like this story to continue with naruto and the rest face akatsuki members and sorry haven't been messaging cause I don't have that kuch internet and only using the app offline so if you happen to message me well I'm on the app offline and will see the message eventually when internet comes back . |