| Reviews for Kaleidoscope (II) |
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snowberryrose chapter 16 . 12/13/2019 “she could not allow him to leave his son...Whatever selfish desires she might have, of course she could not bring herself to be the reason that Mian Yi lived without a father as she had done for most of her life. If she had the heart to do such thing, she wouldn't have been the Xiao Yan Zi that Yong Qi fell in love with. It didn't matter that Mian Yi would still have Zhi Hua, because Yong Qi, of all people, knew only too well what it was like to live with a mother burdened with the regrets of a spurned wife.“ This! I have so many issues with HZGG3 and this is probably one of the biggest things! |
kellentia chapter 14 . 12/5/2019 Ahhhh finally ur back! Hope u settled in well into the new country! |
Lauryn Vi chapter 12 . 11/10/2018 This really was very brilliantly done, and I wish I could favourite this chapter a million times. This rendition between XYZ and YQ was somehow more compelling than the original Time Traveller's Wife (which I found kind of stale...) To see this time-travelling dimension added on to the already glorious mess of how they met/came together was really fascinating. I particularly loved the glimpses into XYZ's future self - a more thoughtful and tempered version of her current self. And I loved the complex and nuanced relationship between XYZ and YQ in this version, and how somehow the time-travelling has made their relationship both more familiar/intimate yet more uncomfortable/nerve-wracking. My favourite bit was definitely the 16/19 (*swoon*), but the 18/35 inspection trip was a close second (short but poignant). Actually, the bits about the pregnancy and the worrying about genetics were also very vivid and REAL. Who am I kidding, I loved them all! (Although I never really accepted HZGG 3, so I'm reluctant to accept Zhi Hua but I understand how she adds a good illustration of predestination to the story.) Also, LOVE your snappy writing. "Embroidered ball of unwanted marriage". *Snort* "Oh, who is this?" I could go and on about this! So I'll just stop here and say thank you for sharing this lovely piece of writing! I'm new (dropping by?) to the fandom (new-ish... I was around almost 20 years ago, before HZGG was on ...) and I'm so glad to have chanced upon your story. What a pleasure! |
Guest chapter 13 . 9/23/2018 Awww... How sweet. Pls make more Yanxi Palace fanfics, I love Yanxi and I just finished it. How cute would it be if in their next life, Ying Luo and Rong Yin were sisters, and Ying Luo was free to seek out Fu Heng? |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2018 Yassssss! Finally a story based on Story of Yanxi Palace! I love that TV series, and am up to I think Episode 29. Can't wait to watch more... |
DrEaMLiN chapter 2 . 10/13/2017 hahaha. i love the rainbow one. did they ever find out why they saw it in different colours? the daemon one is cute time travelling concept is interesting when applied to hzgg. |
Guest chapter 10 . 9/27/2017 It's been a long time since I checked ffnet, but I'm glad I did! I've always adored Kaleidoscope, and this chapter was amazing as usual. The officials' answers were pretty hilarious lol |
joean.min-er chapter 12 . 9/2/2017 Interesting concept! I've thought of this too, but it has always been just outline.. nice to see someone actually have it written. Misses you and your story, hope everything has been great! (: |
Karen chapter 12 . 7/10/2017 I love this concept and that it allows a series of sweet moments to be captured. Thank you for uploading this, it really made my day. Now, back to my 5th re-read of Let Time... |
Tianlu chapter 12 . 6/26/2017 "If it is running away, then I am thankful that you at least still run to me." This line! This whole thing! It was so beautiful. I'm going to have to read The Time Traveler's Wife. |
Tianlu chapter 11 . 4/11/2017 I love seeing Qing Er back in her role. She's just such a good princess - she's got that diplomacy stuff down! I hope Yong Ji will learn to be happy with his bride! (I hear Yong Ji when I listen to the raw audio; at least, that's how Zhang Tielin pronounces it.) |
Guest chapter 11 . 4/11/2017 I love this cute little story with Qing Er and how it delves a little bit more into the brother relationship between Yong Qi and Yong Ji. I just wish there was more interaction between Yong Qi and XYZ haha xx |
KC chapter 11 . 4/9/2017 Thank you for this lovely update! Actually I never thought of (or entertained) the idea that Yong Ji might have a "crush" on XYZ. But somehow this chapter makes sense... thank you for continuously writing on every possible scenarios for hzgg and let the years sculpture our love universe! |
kellentia chapter 11 . 4/9/2017 Always love these out takes from "Let the years" universe! Btw in the HZGG series, the way Yong Ji's name is pronounced is really Yong Ji(4), not like what the pinyin converters said (same sound as Yong Qi). So...Qiong Yau is wrong, or the pinyin converters are wrong? |
Guest chapter 11 . 4/9/2017 Yay, back to Let the Years Sculpture Our Love universe! I miss the universe so - and really enjoy the world you created in it (likely because I also always found it ridiculous that the emperor's favored son, who had a song himself, would just...leave them both). I really enjoyed reading this update. |