Next chapter when? I'm really enjoying this fan fic

this was really cool. Too bad you never finished though.

Damn son! Bloody epic! But so bad this story is gonna be rewrite. When you made something that you think it was right, you will became the enemy of entire world.*sigh* so be it.
The global defense initiative think they make human better ... They must became the greatest threat of entire IS earth.
Those all comment think the Tiberium was play roles of oil to GDI. But... No! You have told that was 2080s those former boys can create the other power more than the Tiberium.

Haha, I think a lot of people reading this story really like seeing IS bashing by the almost OP GDI. It may be OP, but it's a good OP.

It's been some time before you updated, are you packing inspiration? Because there is a second season of IS out there somewhere... Fine writing, interesting characterization but also a bit of mish-mashed tech and slight setting problems. Overall not that bad, but could use more work.

Hope you end your hiatus and continue working on the story.

WARNING: HARSH LANGUAGE AHEAD

After reading your story I looked into the actual game you used (C&C4:TT) and the series Infinite Stratos.

All I can say is that this seems like a complete clusterf #k.

Lets start with the game; was rated at an abysmal .5/10 by nearly every game critic out on the net, both amateur and professional. all units are horribly balanced, there is absolutely no concept of rock/paper/scissors, which was instead used as the basis for the three base types. story itself sucked so back Kane himself has permanently quit the series. so to write a sequel of a "rogue" GDI unit (if this is in fact the faction that splintered from GDI's alliance with Kane) testing tech beyond their comprehension was as stupid their NOD counterparts, both of which stonewalled humanity's efforts to rid the planet of tiberium.

Next is the Anime. IT'S F #KING ANIME! their tech and plots are linear, focusing on characters and subbing minor details for plot progression. At no point in the series were sh!t as F2#ked up as you depicted them. all of your facts were ripped from sexist plotlines from other fanfics sh!tting on the female cast because the author had decided on a prominently female cast as SIDE characters to the Ichika, the MALE protagonist. in the series women don't oppress men, they don't rule society. They go about their everyday lives like women in present day do.

Now for false fact that reviews seem to have taken to hearts as canon.
a.) GDI commandos are not f #king SPARTAN soldiers from Halo, they are like the terran marine corp. from StarCraft. their training does not have a 99% whatever fatality rate. the C&C itself stated it had a 90% WASHOUT rate, with a measly 2% being fatal. to have more than 10 commandos under someone who isn't even a one star ranked field General is horse-sh!t. "commander" is the term used when talking to the "commanding officer" not a single ranked commander has EVER commanded a full veteran commando let alone whatever a$# you pulled your commandos from.
b.) the R&D station? the very on that the GDI warped into the IS-verse with? From that SH!THOLE did you find logic that GDI could fit what amounted to a naval armada, four infantry regiments, and three armored divisions. PLUS a whole R&D staff that could fully staff NASA's space control. Also that station is a sitting duck if all ti took was a single missile from NOD to destroy the Philadelphia in C&C3 what made your station so indestructible. the IS isn't isn't called "INFINITE STRATOS" for sh!ts ang giggles. all flight capable unit are within performance limits to fly up to earth's STRATOSPHERE. there any ranged combat capable unit with a well placed cannon/laser/missile could hit ANY satellite in orbit. or if the IS pilot was crazy enough melee the damn thing.
c.) to compare GDI zone armors to the IS using canon facts noted on their respective original sources. would be trying to pit Iron-Man's Ironmonger backed by the Hammer drones from Iron-Man 2 vs Tony Stark's series mk.2 thru mk.42 from Iron-Man 3. Monger and the drones being GDI and Iron-Man armors being IS; the matchup is SO incompatible that Spec vs Spec one must be sh!tting lies like brick to have battles like yours.
d.) logistics; what sh!t have you've been eating. So far it's been GDI sh!tting on IS-verse every chapter, you've given GDI access to the MARV a C&C3 only vehicle costing massive resources devoting to its operation. you've given your OC characters access to NOD's mobile "offensive" base fully stocked/upgraded with an operational AVATAR/REDEEMER which was somehow stored on your portal R&D station. a fully armed and supplied "air force" along with surplus for ground troops to supply the WW2 d-day invasion, twice.
e.) tech, you turned an IS core AI into GDI's EVA computer interface, that's like turning Halo 3's Cortana/ Halo 4's Roland into iPhone Suri and and you had it done by the same sh!t who broke Kane's warp portal after thinking they could reactivate it just because the Einstein wannabes. and you did it not once but 11 time to "give" GDI an already fan biased edge over a series you yourself hadn't even bothered committing to detail before you started judging, all because you read nearly every other fanfic on this site that killed, degraded, demonized anime mecha vs sh!tty/inconsistent facts created by fans to say that one sh!ts on the other for being inferior because if was made/created by an inferior race/gender/ethnicity.

Lov

It is arcus bomber enter the show

hello lol
good chapter
i hope to read some update soon
please tell me that other project like renaissance would be done like take some music, videos, games, technological theory (for space colony and other scifi tech), animals and plants lifes...
i hope to see some upgrade like the quantum Pocket the IS use to store their weapons added to all GDI armor but also for more store of missile and other weapons on tanks and birds
please have some research make about NOD and SCRIN tech like the stealh generator of NOD and some new energy weapons or upgraded of the generator and energy shield
i hope some new ships and tank
so write a lot
go wild and have fun
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sajuuk

To be truthful, I wanted to give this story a chance. I really did. But I just can't bring myself to read another word. First off, how does GDI keep claiming justification by humanizing NOD against the IS universe? It was kind of thrown out there to just give a reason to give the GDI complete b-rated military vigilantism. It seems to be a big plot hole.

There is a lot of combat and violence in the first chapters, and I'm fine with some battles. But there is just no substance behind it. The GDI just invades the IS universe and just starts killing and destroying anyone and anything without any reason. Also, the way the nearly every IS OC were created only to be used as canon fodder because GDI's faction have ignored the rules of combat nd their own doctrine. They were only there to be annihilated with no background or characterization to give the reader any sympathy. Just a distasteful use of shock value to me.

Another thing is that the way the GDI soldiers are portrayed is absolutely revolting. As mentioned above, they just kill everyone without reason. And they seem to be enjoying it too. Sure, I understand if the goal was to make the reader sympathetic towards their plight of being stuck in an parallel universe with no possiblity of return, but there are other ways than portraying them as ISIS wannabe soldiers I'm surprised there was no mention of sexual assault in any of these skirmishes as the author keeps beating the sexist button like they hate their own mother/sister(s)/girlfriend/Wife/Daughter(s). If there was, this would be the Infinite Strato's universe's version of the Rape of Nanking or Vietnam.

Nothing justifies their BS fanfic facts. It's not feminist superiority it's choice of plot characters that are being abused.

This is as far as I will go.

Uh, shouldn't someone report if things get this bad? The grammar was okay at the start, then all of a sudden it seemed like someone else has hacked and taken this this story for their own; messing up grammar at first, then sentence/paragraphs no longer make much sense. And now serious plots events are not being explained as to how GDI has managed to fit enough manpower, weaponry, supplies that could completely repopulate New York inside a space station designed for limited R&D, all this has degraded much of hope for this story. it's become one curb-stomping favoritism for c&c after another, it's getting really boring.

Seriously, get a proofreader! The grammar in this story... It burns.

Ahh humiliating this stupid fop in never old.

I bet the one who will present the grand gesture, broadcast it around the world and spread that the GDI is here is no other than James himself. The guys at the ISA will be screwed once they know his face.

So what was it exactly that James sent? I can tell it was related to that picture but can't tell what it was exactly that made it into that... and I'm guessing his wife looks like houki?
Also, great chapter and nice funny Omak :)

So james's wife is Houki huh? Also is she form the Millitary like James or she is a civilian?
Ps: I smell a Epic Curb-Stomp Battle coming, PLEASE MADE THE GDI OVERKILL IT,I'm sure the fan would like the Phantom Task get it all because the deserve the beating