Very good

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!

Secon familym second son pun intended. Lol XD

Please make a sequel

Amazing story and a great ending! The only thing I could say here is the final fight did seem short, and rather quick. This is just my personal views, but I would've given Marshall a real chance that he might not have been able to win against the man in the room. The action was kind of short, not really focusing on what the individual was doing and instead focusing on the group as a whole. All in all, great ending to the story and I would love to see a sequel in the near future! Great job!

tres palabras :increible fic.

secuela

Excellent! Totally enjoyed that. You've come a long way in your writing since the first chapter. Congrats!

i would love to see a sequel to this, showing marshall looking for a way home.

I would say yes to the sequel. After all, a story never truly ends unless we turn away from it. If you want help with the plot to your sequel, then here's my advice. The man who tore Marshall from his world adds a variety of unknowns for you to play with. Who was he? Where did he come from? Are there others like this man? How long has this been going on? How many more are in Marshall's situation? How many realities has this man and his possible group affected in the name of their goal? Really man, if you play this right, you could have quite the multi-crossover should you be up to the task. Another suggestion should you choose a chaotic crossover would be to start with lower realities like Prototype and end it with more technologically advanced realities like Halo. I mean, the precursors had to have a way to traverse realities. It was even said in canon that they were more advanced than the Forerunners, who use hard light as though it's a common took! Whatever path you take to your possible sequel, I hope for it to be your masterpiece.

Sequel please! This story is just so amazingly great!

sequel duh awesome story

This is awesome, Fenrir. I hope you keep up the good work and update soon. :)

You should do an epiloge

Try doing a sequel but a crossover of your character in rwby cause that maybe fun

Continue to be awesome !