What a sin have I commited on reading this and not droping a review. One of the few shinkane writings in that is quite attentive on characterization.
I would usually drop a Shinkane writing as soon as I feel "this is not right". As much as I want steamy romance between the two characters, I crave good, compact characterization; something that would usually be abandoned upon writing shinkane romance.
Great job on writing a great Shinkane. Felt the heartache

This was really lovely, and the portrayal of Akane and Kougami's budding forbidden relationship was done really well!

good story. it's sad. the tone was similar to the anime.

This is really good! I think it could be marked in the T rating though

but anyway, I love the introspection surrounding Akane that you've made here. I thought it was really effective with the slow climb of her psycho pass point by point

"Her number, after he leaves, clicks up five points...For Akane, this is despair..."

I like how you paint a picture of Kogami, and Akane's relationship with him in implicit detail. I'm glad you didn't include a section on Kogami's own personal thoughts. He's somewhat of a mystery to her. Their relationship is complicated

Too sad! But so well written.

Beautiful story :)

Beautifully written, so sad. Great fic, cheers!

Really good

Very well written. I love how it blended with what the show was. Nicely done.

amazing story. you're a terrific writer : )

Oh my gosh this was beautiful and now I just ship them even more.

Oh, this is beautiful. I love how you incorporated her grandma, building off (I'm assuming) the brief mention in the series that Akane was close to her grandmother. Everything flows so well.

I hope you update this is really good i like it,
it was cute

This story is so beautifully tragic and amazingly written that I had tears streaming down my face as I finished it. Thank you for sharing it with us

Daaaaaaaaaamn, I loved it.