Sweet and cute

that was a rollercoaster jfc. it's not even your writing because i love some of your other works. i think i just realized my hatred for this universe and these characters after all these years.

"so what if i wanted to kill u lollol idc torture me and id thank u 4 it lol"

idcidc. arthur and most of the knights for that matter are trash period geez

with that said im enjoying this by trying to ignore all of that LMAO

oh my godddd this makes me so mad. yea you made bffs with the rude af enemy but to kill yourself for them...clown alert. i never understood this messed up mentality and i certainly do not get it with merlin. for a split second i was like omg am i a bad person? but the answer is just a plain no. honest to god im glad i am a person with common sense.

me neither wtf am sobbing so hard rn

This was lovely and it made me smile. Thank you so much for writing and sharing!

I'm really sorry about this, but I just wanted to mention that when Fake Arthur said 'you killed my father' I couldn't help but imagine Female Merlin saying: "No, I AM your father!" xD

I like it, but when she argues with the spectres, she gives full explanations for her audience in such a way that it's unnatural. She wouldn't go into so much detail, and it's obvious that you wrote it that way so that Arthur and the Knights would understand. It would have been better if Merlin's conversations with the spectres came across as more natural. When talking to someone who knows what you're referring to, you don't go into lengthy detail. Also, Merlin is constantly sobbing like a baby... excessive considering she went through all those things and became stronger, as well as knowing this maze is a test. The way you wrote it needs much improvement. It's too much of a show for her audience despite not even knowing she has one. She doesn't appear strong at all, she appears like she's breaking down. It would have been better to see a show of strength.

Can I just say how much I love protective Lancelot and Gwaine? I really love protective Lancelot and Gwaine. This is so well written that I might cry.

Everyone is making bets with your life. It's part of their entertainment.
Loved the story /

Wow! Such a great read

wouldnt it be sorceress since you know shes female

I’m not sure...
If merlin when to hogwarts what house she or he would be in I mean people say slytherin but that doesn’t work for the bbc show
I think Merlin’s more a hufflepuff or gryffindor maybe both gryffinpuff